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usmanghiyas
04-30-2006, 10:34 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/220437/220437_1146436484_medium.jpg

Title: Adjustable Wrench
Name: Usman Ghias
Country: Pakistan
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, VRay

Hello
it my first post on CGtalk and feels so good to post my work with some great art work around
I was working with H2(Hummer2) Class project now a days made this for relaxing up my mind & helping out my friend with simple object modeling took me about 2 hours used 3d Max for modeling and Vray for renders used HDRI forl ighting post work with Photoshop ive tried to create some DOF its my first try with DOF so any advices will be really helpful
C & C Welcome
Thankful
Usman Ghias
MindWar
05-01-2006, 07:49 AM
I think pretty much everything’s working, I like the detail on the modeling, and textures with the lighting look very realistic on the wrenches. I think the burl is a little to intense, judge by then 8" mark on the side of the wrench (nice by the way) id guess the piece is basically only 12 inches long. In that amount of distance the burl might not even be seen on a camera, and probably not seen by the human eye.

Otherwise, it looks great, good work.
Silverwing
05-01-2006, 12:00 PM
Very realistic textures/shaders.
Lighting is great too.
The onely thing i didn´t like
is that the dof is much to
strong! I do not think, that
there would be so much dof in
a real photo!

Although nice work!
igric
05-01-2006, 02:06 PM
The picture is nice, even blur is correct for me, I have many real photos with the same DOF, it just depends on the aperture, and time.
Only one question: is the wind on the screw modelled corectly? It seems it does not have inclination at all, and it's somehow too curved, (meshsmoothed) like this.
Otherwise I like it a lot, congrats!
usmanghiyas
05-01-2006, 03:00 PM
thank u all for u replys im agree with ur critics and they are helpful to me ill be careful with them thank u for ur words and considration all :applause: im in my leaning process started to work with 3d for about 4 months ur critics are helpful to me
Usman
Jelmer
05-01-2006, 10:14 PM
very nice and realistic, if i'm really picky i would change the letters, they seem to be max text extruded, they don't look like they're part of the metal parts, even though i think they should be, you could have used displacement there. i agree with igric about the screw.
Milivoj-Lemonade3D
05-02-2006, 07:41 AM
nice modeling and material definition! DOF is a bit odd, but other than that great!
pleasent
05-02-2006, 10:27 PM
Awesome work No Critics for modeling and texturing
rdias1972
05-04-2006, 12:29 AM
Very good image..real object..4 stars..
Akuma1x
05-04-2006, 05:17 AM
Hey man, you can just go around uploading photographs claiming they are 3d!

HAHA just kidding great work very convincing
usmanghiyas
05-04-2006, 09:45 AM
thank u guys :D
LOL Akuma1x:bounce:
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