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KiFe
01-04-2003, 05:44 AM
Hi all.

First post .. err.. mabie my 2nd or 3rd.....
nevertheless..

here's my latest peice.... it's still a WIP (hence the closeup)... ill post more as soon as he's got a body.

hope you likes

http://members.rogers.com/avocadodesigns/random/audlidhead6.jpg

C&C's Welcome
Hexodam
01-04-2003, 03:16 PM
looks great, expecialy the texturing, good job

only crit are the lips, the transition from the face to the lips is too hard, also the line to the left of the mouth is somehow bugging me
aor
01-04-2003, 05:42 PM
yeah, i agree - lips need work.. to sharp.. BUT still a great image.. i love the hair! post more!


:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
KiFe
01-04-2003, 05:53 PM
Thanks guys...

i realise the lips do need work.. and that's first on the agenda.

but there's much more to do still and hence he's a WIP.

working on the clothes now... hehe it's gonna be great.

The hair simply worked out better than i could have hoped... we'll see how it looks when i put some wind dynamics in there.

Also the texturing needs some cleanup.. as well as some re-detailing on the connections on his head. Those blue things in there is just stand-in for the time being.

Thanks for the feedback!
SheepFactory
01-04-2003, 05:58 PM
Why do you post the WIP character in the gallery\finished section?

Please read the rules.

Ali
KiFe
01-04-2003, 06:50 PM
oops.. sorry.

im shure someone will come along and moveit.

sorry to ruin your day.
karabo
01-04-2003, 07:08 PM
the features on his face look like they have been chiseled in. with a hammer and chisel. It doesn't feel like skin. It looks like he's made of rock. Soften his features a little, especially around the mouth area.
SheepFactory
01-04-2003, 08:47 PM
Originally posted by KiFe
oops.. sorry.

im shure someone will come along and moveit.

sorry to ruin your day.

yes i am the one doing all the moving ;)
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