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payam_nj
04-28-2006, 10:07 AM
Payam Najafizadeh is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/journey_begins/view_entries.php?challenger=11519)

Latest Update: Final Image
: final image update
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1148138755_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=3562800#post3562800)

payam_nj
04-29-2006, 01:52 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1146271970_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1146271970_large.jpg)

Mr. Elephant is one of the best friends of Mr. Turtle, and helps him to fly and begin a journey ;)

payam_nj
04-29-2006, 12:18 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1146309518_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1146309518_large.jpg)

hi friend , I am beginer in max
please help me ;)

payam_nj
04-30-2006, 08:51 AM
Isn’t there some one to tell me: “your turtle is look like a frog and you should fix it “ ? :scream:

payam_nj
05-04-2006, 02:33 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1146749616_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1146749616_large.jpg)

mr elephant modeling

alshakno
05-04-2006, 02:38 PM
WoW
nice paya
i love ur idea
i smell an award
hard work to finish it!!!

gl

varma
05-04-2006, 02:39 PM
Hi Payam;
Your turtle looks like a turtle and your doing just fine! It might be a good idea to gather
as many reference pics as you can and study the forms, at least that's how I do it!
good luck with your concept, it looks very interesting!
:)

payam_nj
05-06-2006, 05:58 PM
hi friends
thank u for your replys
alshakno - I know you and I know taht you are joking
Varma - thank you for your kind reply .use the reference pics is a very good idea, thank you for your help

payam_nj
05-06-2006, 06:04 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1146935088_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1146935088_large.jpg)

changing mr elephant style
(using biped and physique )

payam_nj
05-06-2006, 06:10 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1146935441_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1146935441_large.jpg)

first texturing level

payam_nj
05-07-2006, 03:46 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1147013159_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1147013159_large.jpg)

hi friends
this is the untextured background

payam_nj
05-07-2006, 03:53 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1147013609_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1147013609_large.jpg)

background

payam_nj
05-12-2006, 04:05 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1147446339_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1147446339_large.jpg)

Mr turtle fly

payam_nj
05-12-2006, 10:38 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1147469931_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1147469931_large.jpg)

fly modeling update

payam_nj
05-15-2006, 08:54 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1147722864_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1147722864_large.jpg)

hi;)

alshakno
05-17-2006, 09:25 PM
hi payam
awsome
thats realy fantastic
the turtles is fantastic
good feeling
need more work on composit
and dont forget about post working in photoshop

gl

payam_nj
05-20-2006, 10:53 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1148118835_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1148118835_large.jpg)

Mr. Turtle begin the journey .don’t forget Mr. Elephant useful help ;)

SketchPad
05-20-2006, 11:05 AM
Hahaha! The turtle is so funny! :D

I can really imagine that crazy "Inventor-turtle" trying to prove
to the world that he can fly - free as the birds. I'm nuts about your idea.

and now for the crits (albeit a bit late):

- The background is out of place, both colorwise and detail wise
(yes - even if DOF / blurred). It looks like it's hand-dabbed with
a wacom pen ..quickly, while the turtle looks really cool and detailed.

- The turtle neck look too "square", needs to be a bit more roundish ;)
- The wings needs some more "detailing" to them, scratches! Like
he has tried this a "few-times...he he". Eventually some tears'n'ripps.

- The rock texture looks flat and odd, maybe you could "model" the
rock so it doesn't look like a flat texture slapped onto a simple mesh?

But again - I really LIKE your idea and if you worked the image over
(yeah - there's still time...I'm pretty late on my submission too)
you could do wonders on this.

Hope I wasn't being too harsh, I'm honest and straightforward.

living_for_cg
05-20-2006, 11:21 AM
I like your idea...:thumbsup:
It would be better if you spent more time on your modeling.
Good luck guy.

payam_nj
05-20-2006, 12:30 PM
Thank you SketchPad & living_for_cg for your kind reply’s ,

I really like to work more on my idea but as you know I have not enough time. may be after challenge I complete it with more details ;)

payam_nj
05-20-2006, 04:25 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1148138755_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11519/11519_1148138755_large.jpg)

final image update

alshakno
05-21-2006, 09:35 AM
wow payam
thats nice
i smell an award!!!

STAR WARS!!!
gl

payam_nj
05-21-2006, 06:02 PM
hi Alshakno,
thank you for your reply.
award !?? :)))

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