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Kng_Shango
04-27-2006, 12:41 PM
It'be awesome if this time som1 could help me with this piece. Whats cool ,what isnt, hows the lighting, how's the composition...and so on :)

Naisart
04-27-2006, 03:39 PM
Hi,
I think the white is pretty distracting and your eyes gets drawn to that part immedatly because the contrast is so high. I think you should maybe tone it down or perhaps try a differant dolour or something.

For the main character, use som reference for the head. Itīs a bit small right now and I also think you should add more colors in the skin. I like the blue lightning but itīs very vauge right now.

Your eyes are drawn to the left part of the imgage mostly because of the white, and the right part is left out. Also I wouldnīt place the main character in the middle of the imgage, maybe more to the right and also perhaps crop the imgage a bit.

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