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RubenDrakkar
04-27-2006, 04:40 AM
This is my entry WIP for the Forest Demon Demo Reel. In this demos I'll present a dragon trainer wich is in fact the Forest demon training a Forest Dragon. So it is a short film about a minute training this creature how to use long range weapons. So this is my thread the torso head of the Forest Demon please critic the best you can

Rubens

Rebeccak
04-27-2006, 08:24 PM
Hi Rubens,

Welcome aboard! :) Great to see your Anatomy Thread here, and your work is very cool!

I made a few edits as suggestions to your perspective shot ~ my suggestions are to enlarge the head just a bit and to move the ear so that the bottom lobe rests just above the upper hinge of the jaw. Also, the sternocleidomastoid muscle will connect just behind the ear. I also recommend widening the chest just slightly ~ purely a subjective suggestion.

In the front view, his shoulders look a bit weak / slouched and you may want to raise them a bit more / make them a bit more scary. The eyes and nose look a bit small as well, but this may be in line with the 'alien' look that you are going after. :)

Image showing sternocleidomastoid muscle:

http://catalog.nucleusinc.com/imagescooked/9657W.jpg


Let me know what you think! :)

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b380/rebeccak5/Anatomy%20Thread%20of%20Ruben%20Drakkar/Ruben-Drakkar.gif

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b380/rebeccak5/Anatomy%20Thread%20of%20Ruben%20Drakkar/Ruben-Drakkar_review-2.jpg

This page may be useful:

Anatomy Atlases (http://www.anatomyatlases.org/atlasofanatomy/index.shtml)
http://www.anatomyatlases.org/atlasofanatomy/index.shtml

Also you may find this thread useful from time to time:

Reference for Anatomical and Figurative Art (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=257570)
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=257570

Cheers, :)

~Rebeccak

RubenDrakkar
04-27-2006, 10:27 PM
Great Great Critic Thanks For The Inmense Help Missis Thanks, IŽll Put More Posts Arranging This Problem Thanks, You're A Genius Missis Rebecca

Rubens

Rebeccak
04-27-2006, 10:40 PM
Rubens,

Lol, no problem! Your work is really cool, definitely looking forward to seeing more of it. :)

Cheers,

~Rebeccak

RubenDrakkar
04-29-2006, 01:13 AM
Hello Missis Rebecca this are some Images of the modeling of the hand of this character some alone and also with a glove enjoy and please critic, Your great I am going to arrange the stuffs you say. Great critizer full of humility and full of help. Thanks a lot

Rubens

Rebeccak
04-29-2006, 04:30 AM
Hi Rubens,

You're welcome! :)

I did a review of your new hand ~ looking really good so far, but in places need some small adjustments. I think the fingers are looking a little too 'lumpy' and need more structural cohesion. The forefinger looks a bit thin, and I think it would help to widen the tips of the fingers. Also you want the fingernails to be a bit more consistent in their width. Finally I think the 'webbing' in between the fingers needs to be more pronounced. Here is a suggestion:

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b380/rebeccak5/Anatomy%20Thread%20of%20Ruben%20Drakkar/Ruben-Drakkar-3.gif

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b380/rebeccak5/Anatomy%20Thread%20of%20Ruben%20Drakkar/Ruben-Drakkar_review-3A.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b380/rebeccak5/Anatomy%20Thread%20of%20Ruben%20Drakkar/Ruben-Drakkar_review-3B.jpg

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b380/rebeccak5/Anatomy%20Thread%20of%20Ruben%20Drakkar/Ruben-Drakkar_review-3C.jpg

I think in the gloved images, the hands look too small for the gloves ~ since the hands should be scary and kind of prominent, you might consider making them larger relative to the clothing.

Hope this helps!

Cheers,

~Rebeccak

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