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04-27-2006, 05:40 AM
This is my entry WIP for the Forest Demon Demo Reel. In this demos I'll present a dragon trainer wich is in fact the Forest demon training a Forest Dragon. So it is a short film about a minute training this creature how to use long range weapons. So this is my thread the torso head of the Forest Demon please critic the best you can
04-27-2006, 09:24 PM
Welcome aboard! :) Great to see your Anatomy Thread here, and your work is very cool!
I made a few edits as suggestions to your perspective shot ~ my suggestions are to enlarge the head just a bit and to move the ear so that the bottom lobe rests just above the upper hinge of the jaw. Also, the sternocleidomastoid muscle will connect just behind the ear. I also recommend widening the chest just slightly ~ purely a subjective suggestion.
In the front view, his shoulders look a bit weak / slouched and you may want to raise them a bit more / make them a bit more scary. The eyes and nose look a bit small as well, but this may be in line with the 'alien' look that you are going after. :)
Image showing sternocleidomastoid muscle:
Let me know what you think! :)
This page may be useful:
Anatomy Atlases (http://www.anatomyatlases.org/atlasofanatomy/index.shtml)
Also you may find this thread useful from time to time:
Reference for Anatomical and Figurative Art (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=257570)
04-27-2006, 11:27 PM
Great Great Critic Thanks For The Inmense Help Missis Thanks, IŽll Put More Posts Arranging This Problem Thanks, You're A Genius Missis Rebecca
04-27-2006, 11:40 PM
Lol, no problem! Your work is really cool, definitely looking forward to seeing more of it. :)
04-29-2006, 02:13 AM
Hello Missis Rebecca this are some Images of the modeling of the hand of this character some alone and also with a glove enjoy and please critic, Your great I am going to arrange the stuffs you say. Great critizer full of humility and full of help. Thanks a lot
04-29-2006, 05:30 AM
You're welcome! :)
I did a review of your new hand ~ looking really good so far, but in places need some small adjustments. I think the fingers are looking a little too 'lumpy' and need more structural cohesion. The forefinger looks a bit thin, and I think it would help to widen the tips of the fingers. Also you want the fingernails to be a bit more consistent in their width. Finally I think the 'webbing' in between the fingers needs to be more pronounced. Here is a suggestion:
I think in the gloved images, the hands look too small for the gloves ~ since the hands should be scary and kind of prominent, you might consider making them larger relative to the clothing.
Hope this helps!
04-29-2006, 05:30 AM
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