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DiM
04-25-2006, 08:23 AM
Hi all!
I have started to do a head. It is last stage with two symmetric parts. Further all will be dissymetric. Comments please.
http://dimm3d.mail333.com/baron_test/dav_head2.jpg

http://dimm3d.mail333.com/baron_test/dav_head1.jpg

Gabe
04-25-2006, 08:35 AM
Looks like a good start.





I'd try and add more muscle definition or mass in the mouth area around the lips.

The orbicularis oris I think is called, or something like that.



Especially around the outer corners of the mouth, where the sculpture has a pretty noticeable knot.

DiM
04-25-2006, 09:22 AM
Thanks for advice. I seem have corrected. Or not?
http://dimm3d.mail333.com/baron_test/dav_head3.jpg

Gabe
04-25-2006, 09:55 AM
Still needs more muscle mass around the mouth.

This might help

http://home.comcast.net/~gabe687/david-oris-bulge.jpg

DiM
04-25-2006, 03:49 PM
http://dimm3d.mail333.com/baron_test/dav_head4.jpg
next detail

SHEPEIRO
04-25-2006, 03:58 PM
looking good

the bottom half of the nose, between bump and tip looks a little too long, this is giving it an aged look IMO

DiM
04-25-2006, 05:43 PM
http://dimm3d.mail333.com/baron_test/dav_head5.jpghair is started.

Gabe
04-25-2006, 05:49 PM
Yeah, that looks better.

Now just blend that muscle more in to the lips. It needs to be a smoother, more subtle transition.

You might try using a little bit of relax modifier in some areas with soft select.

I don't remember how you do that in Maya.

I use relax in little sharp spots, so I don't have to be pulling individual points all the time.



Your eyebrow ridge seems a little bit too sharp, towards the center of the forehead.

DiM
04-25-2006, 06:05 PM
Thanks Gabe!
I shall earn additionally a smooth brush, but already tomorrow or at night. Today it is time to make a break for a dinner 8)))!

RobertoOrtiz
04-30-2006, 02:44 PM
TWO WEEKS TO GO! (MAY 15th):Hardcore Modeling Challenge: THE DAVID! (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=352022)
Just a reminder

-R

DiM
05-05-2006, 04:25 PM
http://dimm3d.mail333.com/baron_test/dav_head6.jpg


Hair after big break for a dinner 8)))!

RobertoOrtiz
05-08-2006, 03:06 PM
FYI

ONE WEEK TO GO :The Hardcore Modeling MINI-Challenge #1: The David (MAY 15th) (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=354766)

ROBERTOS BULLHORN: Expanded RULES for the FINAL RENDER (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=354104)

-R

DiM
05-16-2006, 05:53 AM
Unfortunately there was no time to finish work.:sad: Too much commercial work. Thanks all!
It was good sport competition!:applause:

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