Character: Pretty Lady

[Lukashi]

Oh yah heres a nude shot hehehehe
http://www.geocities.com/lukashi/nude.txt

Id be really gratefull to any advice about lighting or rendering so if anyone has any tips plz dont be shy :wip:

[Blackassheep]

I love your work. She is very cute. Nice touch. Do you have a website? Was this Box poly modeling? Great Job.

Mike R.

[Lukashi]

Thanks black ass sheep, My website is www.geocities.com/lukashi but i havent updated it in a while...

It was all poly modeling in 3ds max

[Erik]

Hi good modeling ;) nice job.
you should to try something about the eyes, it seem to have something wrong...
Thanks for the nude babe ;)

[Lukashi]

Im trying out different types of lighting setups, any tips or comments are welcome

[Commiekeebler]

Are you gonna fix that shoulder or am I gonna have to break my foot in your a$$? :)

:bounce:

[Lukashi]

Rarrr

[CDS]

I agree, the axillary/shoulder area need work. It looks too much like rubber. The index finger looks awkward. IF you slip her thumb under he wrap and have the index slightly pinching the wrap(kind of looking like she might take it off) might add some realism to the hand placement.

On the aspect of scene and lighting. I would use the cyc as a back drop and not an interactive prop. I would have her lean on some other static prop like a column/pillar, or something.

General lighting looks to be over exposed.

[XerC]

Well! Really beautiful young lady you've got there :D
Concerning the nude picture:
Cute face, well-shaped breasts, sweet bellybutton and... hüm!? What's that?? Isn't there something missing? :thumbsdow
Have a look at this website on human anatomy (http://www.umkc.edu/sites/hsw/sexed.html)... :drool: :p
Honestly, you should work on the shoulders and hands. Everything else is very well done! :airguitar

Greetings,
XerC

[Lukashi]

Thx for the comments guys :)

Xerc: Yes i know plenty about female anatomy :p, I just didnt feel like modelling that stuff

CDS: Yes i will try to fix the shoulder area, and im also trying to fix the lighting

[Lukashi]

Trying to pink up the lights a lil bit

[Blackassheep]

Add her nipples slighty pooping out of the shirt. That always makes the model look 10 times better and sexy.

[WarAngel]

Pretty is right :) Nice model.

[Lukashi]

Thanks WarAnglel,
Black Ass Sheep, id do that but like then id have to change her bra into a style that might be too sleezy and that would probably make her too slutty to be pretty imo anyways going to fix those shoulders now :)

[altermind]

her ankels seem to flat......

and her face is to round..... she feels like she's been smothed out..... which is not natural..... humans do have some bumps on em :P

nice work thought... better then I can do

[CDS]

Big improvement on the hand.....well done. What type of light setup are you using. Maybe post a screen shot of a perspective that shows all of your lights and subject.

[Lukashi]

Alright just a little shoulder fix should be it for now, any tips on the lighting would be really appreciated :D

CDS: The lighting is a light blue GI with multiplier of .7, then there is a is light blue spotlight coming for the left witha multiplier of .65
and from the front there is a red spotlight with a multiplier of .5.

I also used one omni light that excluded the rest of the objects.

here is the wireframe

http://www.geocities.com/lukashi/wire2.txt

and here is an update of the scene

[CDS]

Ok....its kinda tough over the net but Ill try. First dont change anything, except drop out all of the gi. Then render and post.

Whats your global light level set at?

(make sure you only change one thing at a time until you get a handle on how lights interact with your scene, if you change to many things at once youll end up chasing your tail)

[Lukashi]

y drop the gi? Its serving as a good scource of ambient light...If i drop the gi then i just have to turn ambient up...

[CDS]

To analyze, your basic light setup I need to know what is GI motivated and whats not.

[Lukashi]

Here is the setup
I have all the things checked in brazil luma(Direct Illumination/Indirect Illumination)
mulitiplier for the skylight is .7 with a light blue color.

Here is the gi http://www.geocities.com/lukashi/only.txt

Here is no gi http://www.geocities.com/lukashi/no.txt

Thanks for helping out :D

Also there are no post effects

[CDS]

Man, this is gonna be extra tough, cause I only use the scanline and Mental Ray. Ive seen Brazil render some pretty amazing works so I can understand your desire to use it.

Seeing the two lighting solutions I would have to guess that your gi is set too high. Try droping it down incrimentally.

Wish I could help ya more, but Brazil and MR are totally different.

[Lukashi]

mmm now im trying to tweak her facial expression...

[sarfarazsoomro]

luke this one's great......pretty lady;)

[yaz786vip]

X-elent work. keep it up!

just a few pointers. the hair, i feel that it needs to be dropped a bit more naturally. i kinda had a go at in on photoshop. hope you dont mind. looks abit more natural, but not a major problem compared to the shoulder. the little hump, is it just the angle or is there ment to be such a bg hump on the shoulder?

the feet look too manly, more manly then mine! it is a girl? just joe king! well the toes can bees squeesed in abit and loose some of the gap, a common problem with smooth. the pose needs to be more relaxed. one heel needs to be on the floor and the other one raised and there fore the raised heel leg will need to be bent slightly, hope you understand that. the the finger tips, bend them slightly and it will topps.

well i am sorry for being so harsh. it is onlt fair to comment the really good espects of the work! cute, sexy matreal creases are natural lighting is almost there, 1 min, it one of the bra straps floating and not sitting on the shoulder?

well final thing, try this exercise, stand against the wall, any wall ans copy the pose and hold it. after a min or so you will ont only see the problems in that pose but also feel it. the fingers will be the first to show signs.

Well thank you for getting this far with out swearing or cursing me and i hoped that i helped you and i apoligise for anything that i have said that has been wrong or offensive! :wavey:

[chepe297]

Nice body, if you add some expression to her face then it gives her some characteristics :)

[Lukashi]

yaz786vip: Great Critique , The latest update has some thing a bit different than the render you comment but most of the criticism still apply. Your not being harsh at all just very very usefull :thumbsup: . Ill read over what you said a couple times and then ill get to fixing her up a bit. Thanks for the input :).

chepe297: Good point, im trying to fix up her expression a bit, right now im trying to give her a bit of joy to her eyes ;)

Thx for the input guys :D

[Flog]

she looks so soft. :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
The way a woman should feel!!

Good work!

[New]

In my opinion the final picture is too exposed. About the model i would say that maybe it would improve working more on feets, shoulder and the belly (noticing bones, muscles and fat).

[Lukashi]

Sorry its been a while since i last updated, been busy being lazy :hmm:

Changed the pose a bit, after some composition i think this will be the final render

[Blackassheep]

Is the bottom clothes posted 2 be a towel, or a part of her skirt? She loks better and better. If its a towel, maybe have a fuzzy look to ti with maybe a pattern and a border on it. Just a thought. If not, it looks like just some cloth she wrapped around her. What are you going for?

[Lukashi]

Im going for one of those cloth things chicks where at the beach, i could give it a pattern thought..

[behzad]

Looks good, but something wrong with the chest. It seems too small, even her shoulders. Also watch for the seam in her arm as it folds. Also watch the toes. The hands are amazing.

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