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cristinelo 04-24-2006, 07:55 AM Howdy again!
This time with a brand new Animation Demo Reel based on your critics...and of course,my self-criticism.
This is not the definitive version,since the first shot it is rendered defective.My mistake.
Anyway,the Reel`s thorax it`s still open,so I still can apply changes.So bring on the crits!
http://cristinel-bostan.com/files/DEMO_REEL_2006.mov (http://cristinel.bostan.googlepages.com/DEMO_REEL_2006_7Mb.mov)
Thanks a lot.
Cristinel Bostan
character reAnimator
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Junerahe
04-24-2006, 11:39 PM
overall you've done some really good work but two things that bugged me were first of all the lack of a moving hold when ur character in the first peice of animation says "but no" i feel that the pose could be stronger and that a moving hold would undo the stiffness that i feel hurts a solid piece of work.
the second is in your really cool wall jump taht although the sequence as a whole looks natural, the character's jump from off the wall seems a bit effortless as tho the guy was spiderman or something. beyond that u've done great work
cristinelo
04-28-2006, 09:08 AM
overall you've done some really good work but two things that bugged me were first of all the lack of a moving hold when ur character in the first peice of animation says "but no" i feel that the pose could be stronger and that a moving hold would undo the stiffness that i feel hurts a solid piece of work.
the second is in your really cool wall jump taht although the sequence as a whole looks natural, the character's jump from off the wall seems a bit effortless as tho the guy was spiderman or something. beyond that u've done great work
Thank you very much for pointing some of the errors.I have fixed a couple of them and soon I`ll post it.
Thanks again.
Cristinel Bostan
pixelpickle
04-28-2006, 09:55 AM
G'day mate, yeah I like your work keep it up. any critiques I have have already been mentioned above. But...and this is only a personal thing and quite irrelevent so please feel free to ignore it ;) : the music style has been used tirelessly over the years and is getting a little tedious, maybe find something else. But like I said, this is just a personal thing and I may not have mentioned it if I wasn't a little drunk.
Well done!
cristinelo
04-28-2006, 12:55 PM
G'day mate, yeah I like your work keep it up. any critiques I have have already been mentioned above. But...and this is only a personal thing and quite irrelevent so please feel free to ignore it ;) : the music style has been used tirelessly over the years and is getting a little tedious, maybe find something else. But like I said, this is just a personal thing and I may not have mentioned it if I wasn't a little drunk.
Well done!
:buttrock: Thanks!Music it`s allways a hard decission....Because is not for myself...I`ll look around anyway.
Thanks again.
Cristinel Bostan
character reAnimator
mistasam02
04-29-2006, 06:52 PM
ur animations are wicked! i especially liked that run up the wall jump roll game-lookin clip! some great work in ur reel! props :thumbsup:
cristinelo
05-02-2006, 03:24 PM
Ok,this is my Reel in its final shape.
http://www.cristinel-bostan.com/files/DEMO_REEL_2006_8MB.mov
Thank you very much every one for your imput.
Cristinel Bostan
character reAnimator
It's very emotional animation! Awesome, dude!)))
cristinelo
05-09-2006, 07:39 AM
Thank you very much everyone.
:thumbsup:
Wilson-3d
05-10-2006, 01:59 PM
I have seem a lot of versions of this lately. It it really looking good. I think you have made some good chioces in cutting and going back and tweaking things. Nice job!
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