Slice and Dice my New Character Animation Reel

[SheepFactory]

Hey man ,

i really like the man and the turkey running gag you have going on in the reel , made me laugh out loud a couple times. :)

I think you can work on polishing your animation , right now it has that first pass quality to it and doesnt look polished to me. I think you have a nice variation of things in there they just need a little more work to make em shine.

Great job overall though , really fun reel to watch.

[Sc0rPs]

Hey was that chicken one of my ChickenTroopers??? ;)

Okok I also loved your running gag with the old timer and the chicken!

[tamahoma22]

You've got a lot of good stuff here... but like previously stated... got to really fine tune those bad boys :) Really get those ease in and outs working for you and watch your weight shifts, sometimes a little off... also make sure your best stuff is at the front, you had some pretty good stuff later on, should swap those around...

Some really silly stuff, just keep working on it... and good luck :)

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[Wilson-3d]

Thanks a lot for the critiques and comments. All great points!

It is a tough call to go into some of them again or just cut them from it and keep moving on. I think I may work on two of the old man (Friedhelm) and cut two. And perhaps the start of the Lowman with the microphone. I may just cut the start of that one and have him up at he mic.

Any other suggestions and crits are really appreciated.

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