Dixon Reel

[J2thaC]

a good start, this will definately benefit from further editing. The work seemed to get stronger towards the end. If you switch that around, grab their attention with the best, and perform a little survival of the fitest with the first 30 seconds I think it would look allot more polished :thumbsup:

[Wilson-3d]

I agree that some of the best is at the end. I like the guy shooting the gun and flying back a lot. Also you don't have to give credit to the rig at the end. Keep the focus on you. You should have a reel break down that tells people what you did included with any submissions and / or on you site. So that would take care of that. Also your web site is way to distracting I would just add it to your title and end full screen graphic you have. If someone is interstied they will see it there. HTH. Take Care.

[dondixon]

Thanks for the comments guys, Im still going back and refining some things and plan on adding in some 2d animations as well, I made a few editing changes on it but still needs more work.


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[Capel]

some of your stuff is decent. the guy shooting the gun at the beginning has a few problems. mainly when he hits the wall and falls to the ground. that's an opportunity for some really nice overlap and weight, but i think it's lacking in those areas right now. in your acting pieces the lip sync isn't great. none of it seems to read correctly, really at all. you're definately well on your way, but i think every piece could benefit from a nice re-working, focusing on animation fundamentals. keep on truckin. it's definately getting there.

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