My first post

[Frinsklen]

Hey, nice to see you around here, 3DKaskee.

What a hard job... modelling Audrey Tautou...
But I have to say, that if I had to model a realistic human head and I could choose, it would be Audrey Tautou! :)

Hard job indeed, maybe you don't want to hear this, but even though I've seen the movie like a thousand times, I didn't recignize her when I first saw your model.
Forget about the hair for now, focus on making it look like the actress. She's the perfect girl, and she deserves a perfect model!!

I also think you should post a couple of reference pictures, as well as side and front views of your model so we can see if you're going the right way.


ánimo! ya queda menos... :)

Saludos

[3DKaskee]

my progress...

[3DKaskee]

if somebody can help me with the 3dsmax plugin Shag hair, please send me a mail to 3DKaskee@3DKaskeeStudio.com

I find very dificults to implement the hair in some parts of the head where there are other hair pieces... In the other hand I have the model and I continues work on It. It´s my progress and my wireframe (giant wireframe list). I hope that somebody help me or I became crazy :shrug: ... crey crazy:surprised ... Best wishes for all

http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/imagenes/4-1-03.jpg

http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/imagenes/wireframeProgreso-4-1-2003L.jpg

[Fasty]

Welcome 3DKaskee!
I'll try to crit as best as I can...
The lips on your model are quite a bit off at the moment. In your reference image and the one Frinsklen posted her lips certainly don't stick out as much as they do in your model, and the shape is also off. If you look in the photos you'll see they get quite narrow towards the corners of her mouth. While you're there you can see she has an extremely characteristic smile, with distinct "creases" (I'm sure there's a proper word for them) at the edges of her mouth and up to the sides of her nose.
I notice in your model her jaw is quite long compared to her picture. Try putting more "shape" into her jawline and make it slightly "fuller" if you know what I mean, because in both pictures her chin is not that far from her neck. If you look at the side view of your model, you'll notice that the neck is a long way back towards the back of the head, that could be a part of the problem too.
Her nose isn't too bad, but if you look at the picture of her you'll see the bridge of her nose isn't that far out from her eye sockets and cheeks. I think it also points down slightly more than you have it in your model.
I think the eyes are where you really need to look at alot of reference photos if you can, because just with these two i can already see that they are quite different from your model. Her eyes seem to be alot rounder and "cute"!!
Well I hope I haven't been overly critical of your work, because I think you have a solid base there to work with. Just keep tweaking!

[3DKaskee]

than you for your help. I´ll still in it for next week(or I became a vertex...) you can see another image references:

http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey01.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey08.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey10.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey104.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey112.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey114.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey117.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey122.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey128.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey26.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey27.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey28.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey30.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey31.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey34.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey35.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey38.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey53.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey54.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey61.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey71.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey75.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey82.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey88.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey90.jpg
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey96.jpg

[Frinsklen]

Hi again.
I agree with everything Fasty said, I think he did a great critique, try to take into account his advices. He's right he has as extremely characteristic smile, that's going to be the hardest part I think.
I would also say that her lower lip shouldn't stick out as much as the upper lip.
http://www.3dkaskeestudio.com/proyecto_tautou/references/audrey08.jpg

Saludos


PD. Sugiero que cambies el título del mensaje, porque "my first post" no da ningún tipo de información acerca de lo que contiene, cámbialo por algo como "head model: Audrey Tautou" o "character: Amelie". Además aquí insisten mucho en eso, sobretodo en el foro de Gallery/Finished work.

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