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njo
04-21-2006, 11:55 PM
its bewtween two unknown jedi's. i used painter and i hope that if i keep practicing ill become a master at this :). let me know your houghts.

http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/1615/jedifight26mi.jpg

hef
04-22-2006, 01:01 AM
love the light, dude. keep it up!

BrutalMonk
04-22-2006, 08:26 AM
Yea the light looks cool, now you must add more details for the characters, what about making line art? Or you can add more details for this of course.
I look forward the update, keep it up

njo
04-22-2006, 01:33 PM
heres an update :)

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/6906/jedifight24yh.jpg

cuddlesmcsavage
04-22-2006, 09:32 PM
i think the most obvious thing you need to work on is the anatomy of the characters. they kinda resemble clay models right now, the proportions are all wrong. the lighting is pretty good, but you need to put something in the background to add some more depth to the image, and right now its rather bland. you should also think about doing a more interesting composition, as having a straight on view doesnt make for much of a dynamic piece. you're getting there with the lighting though, looking forward to the next update!

njo
04-22-2006, 11:26 PM
i restarted..hope you like it better :). I have one problem though im not good at creating faces in painter yet so i left it blank for now.

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/5706/jedistandooff24eo.jpg

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