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svdf
01-02-2003, 11:14 AM
hello i'm making a book for my uncle and he asked me to make an image for the front of the book... i've made something, and i hope you could give me some tips to maybe improve it...
thanks!

insseuv
01-02-2003, 12:29 PM
hmm, what the topic of his book ?? 'cause i dont understand very much.... :)

JonM
01-02-2003, 01:54 PM
that is pretty realistic!!, a background maybe? :)

svdf
01-02-2003, 01:55 PM
well... it's a bit dificoult to explain (it's in dutch... ;) ) but it's about the life of Jesus, and it's called something like "The puzzel, the piece of evidence" (i hope i translated it well ;) ) but it's about pieces of text in the bible and they are put together in the book and it's like the pieces of Jesus' live come together...

i know it's very dificoult... but just give me some comments on the realism and modeling... i'm just a beginner with lightwave... well i've done some stuff... but i still need help..

i hope it's a bit more clear now...

grd:)

svdf
01-02-2003, 02:09 PM
JonM:
what kind of background were you thinking of? because there's also going to be text in it, like this:

svdf
01-03-2003, 09:51 AM
no more comments???:shrug:

Hates_
01-03-2003, 12:01 PM
Very nice. I think that perhaps the text layout could be done a bit nicer as it seems to spoil the beautiful render. I think it just stands out a bit too much? :surprised

svdf
01-03-2003, 12:20 PM
hmmm well it's about the book, and not about the image... but what were you thinking of? other text color?
thnx for the comment by the way:buttrock:

Hates_
01-03-2003, 12:37 PM
Hmmm well I think maybe just the little things, like the text overlapping the piece at the bottom and the title seems a little squashed :shrug:

I dunno :) Don't listen to me! :p

svdf
01-03-2003, 12:52 PM
no that's a good point! i will think of that with my next render!:thumbsup:

JonM
01-03-2003, 01:50 PM
With the text it looks better :)

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