Zarktor Imperial elf

[EternalRest]

little update.

im busy atm therefore im slow :(
is it good? help a noob :P

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/5425/imperialeelficoarmor0ya.jpg

[Crackjoe]

Noob? I think it looks great so far the leather seems a bit to shiny the bumpmap could also use a little touching up. Keep updating most people on this forum just lurk dont get discouraged.

[TraceR]

Nice to see another Blender user showing off some great artwork! It looks very good sofar!

I'd have to see more renders to give better crits, because I can see only the front right now. I agree the leather could use some work, but all the other textures look nice. Mabye add some drit/rust around the edges of the metal to give it a worn look.

Hope to see an update soon.

[neonneo]

nice materials, you're no noob :D

[J-Bradley]

Hey EternalRest.

I think the model is great cant find any crit on that.
The materials are off too a good start too, I agree with TraceR maybe beat it up a little make it look worn, maybe not beat up but at least its had some use.
Also leather mostly has a wide specular, so maybe dulling down the intensity would make yours look more leathery.
The last thing I could find was maybe the metal on the armour isnt quite reflective enough, on the shoulder pads when they turn perpendicular it seems to turn a bit plastic, try uping the reflections.

But great work post more updates soon! keep it up.

[J-Bradley]

Hey EternalRest.

I think the model is great cant find any crit on that.
The materials are off too a good start too, I agree with TraceR maybe beat it up a little make it look worn, maybe not beat up but at least its had some use.
Also leather mostly has a wide specular, so maybe dulling down the intensity would make yours look more leathery.
The last thing I could find was maybe the metal on the armour isnt quite reflective enough, on the shoulder pads when they turn perpendicular it seems to turn a bit plastic, try uping the reflections.

But great work post more updates soon! keep it up.

[Brian-Bradley]

Sorry for the double post, account seemed to be on the fritz, so just posting an apology on my dads account.

Joel

[J-Bradley]

Sorry had to post ( the one on the leather and reflections ) in my dads account mine would not post.


Joel

[decipleofX]

Damn you did this with belnder im thuraly impressed

[pap87]

Im a noob with 1year or less of exp with 3D grafic.

That makes two of us :). Really great job you've done here too!
My crit is not a very important one, actually it's more of an opinion. Generally when i think of elves I imagine lightly armed and armoured people not heavy clanking armour, BUT .... please do not change a thing because it is excellent. Besides elves are not real so they can be whatever we want them to be, true? So once again great job, well done :thumbsup:!

[Guy In Rubber Suit]

For being a rookie with only a year experience is pretty damn good right there. I really have nothing to add in the way of critique.

Will this be added to a character or is it just going to be a suit of armor?

[EternalRest]

Tnx for all guys.

The char will be this.Is a "old" project and i think that i'll use some parts of this char...not much time for remake 1...maybe in the next project.

I hope to make a good 3D model because my PC isnt good..AMD 1200 -.-" i can't use a lots of poly :(
So..maybe this will be the char (if i have time i'll remake 1,if not i'll use this)


http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/8095/jenovaneck7hp.jpg

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/6617/testbocca6xs.jpg

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4683/testbocca11uc.jpg

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4628/jenovcopia5rk.jpg

[Andre]

Man I don't know why you call yourself a noob!!! This is great work. I love the armor can't wait to see what the final will look like!

grtz,

Andre

[EternalRest]

heheh look the art gallery and see if im a noob or no :)

tomorrow i have all the day for work with my elf.I hope to do a good update ^^

[Fudge]

looks good but gah why is he waring so little cloths? i swear females do it so sudduce the enamy, he isnt going to sudce anyone... or maybe his intent is to blind them?

Fudge

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