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Anneli
04-21-2006, 11:53 AM
Hello,

I had a weird vision last night of a bottled girl. So I did a fast scetch (10min) to try out the designspace... What do you think of this? Should I try a different angle, or anything?
Please help me out.

http://www.anneliolander.com/bottled.jpg

evakristjans
04-21-2006, 02:50 PM
The first impression that I get is that the bottle opening/neck (sp?) takes up too much space on the picture. It diverts the viewers attention away from the girl.

Try tilting the bottle a bit and/or shrinking the neck and opening of the bottle, that should give more focus on the girl =)

In every other aspect I find the picture and composition very nice, will be great when it has some colour on ^^

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