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simjoy
04-21-2006, 08:20 AM
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Title: WW2 Jeep
Name: Simon Joyce
Country: United Kingdom
Software: 3ds max

This is a model of a Willy's jeep from WW2. I tried to make it as accurate as i could using the reference material available.
When it came to texturing it i decided that there was just too many spotlessly clean CG vehicles around so i went for a dirty, well used look.
I have spent longer on this model than any previous work in my relatively short 3D life, and hopefully that shows.
I may go for something cleaner next time, but then again.

FluKe73
04-21-2006, 10:45 AM
Great job! I love the dirt, the only thing would be to add dirt tracks on the "Studio-floor" :) or put it in a real environment! You can't fail to put it in a environment since it looks so great!

Flegeton
04-21-2006, 11:32 AM
The axe handle looks bent, it was the first thing that caught eye on me :P
Otherwise great job :)

bitBrain
04-21-2006, 11:33 AM
Looks absolutely fine to me. :) I love the tyres. Nothing to crit, except maybe the glass, it looks like two square holes. I know, sometimes it's so hard to make it catch a light glint :( Maybe some squashed bugs on it? hehehe...

kevjon
04-21-2006, 11:44 AM
Great job on your Jeep and congrats on bringing it from WIP to a final render. It came out really well....and really looks like it has had a hard life in the field.

mrR
04-21-2006, 12:07 PM
Great one!
Love the textures!
Keep up this way!
Would love to see it in an environment! :)

ChewyPixels
04-21-2006, 01:36 PM
I agree about the glass. Why not try mudding it up and make them look like they've been wiped by the wipers? Sounds funny, but I'm sure you know what I mean. :D

Other than that, looks excellent! :thumbsup:

dorvanium
04-21-2006, 03:11 PM
great modeling & textures . good luck man . :)

Bellum
04-21-2006, 03:56 PM
I like the model a lot. My only crit would be... the materials for the parts all share the same luminous, diffuse, specular, and reflection. It makes it look like a toy made from a single plastic mold. Good start.

tarekmax
04-21-2006, 04:43 PM
So nice simjoy I realy like your Willy's jeep:cool:

B3AND1P
04-21-2006, 04:45 PM
great model but I think the windows need some dirt and grime too.

simjoy
04-21-2006, 07:22 PM
thank you all very much for your comments. They are all welcome.

Ironically, through the course of making this the most comments i received were concerning the amount of dirt on the windscreen.
They all said it was too dirty, so i cleaned them up ! :shrug:;)

Anyway i've learnt a lot from this and i will put it to good use in my next project.

here are some other views of the jeep, including one with the hood up.

http://www.simjoycreations.co.uk/assets/multimedia/group_web.jpg

maksy
04-21-2006, 08:38 PM
Very very nice modeling & texturing :bowdown: :bowdown:

Jelmer
04-21-2006, 09:14 PM
this came out really nice , good job, i had seen this a while back in the WIP section , glad you've finished it, i'm still working om my own car..

sandrum
04-22-2006, 04:16 PM
The extra detail like dirt in the wheels brings it out well. Superb modelling too.:arteest:

CGadrian
04-23-2006, 12:52 AM
I like it

good job !

seagulls
04-23-2006, 01:08 AM
Great job! but i must agree about the background.

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