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hawksworld

03-08-2002, 06:28 PM

Hi
I'm a newbie making his first post on work. I dabble in 3d as a hobby, so I can't hold a candle to you guys! The quality of work here is fantastic. Anyway, this is a single seater scout concept that I did with Organica and Cinema 4D. All comments welcome.

http://www.hawksworld.demon.co.uk/sssc1.jpg
http://www.hawksworld.demon.co.uk/sssc2.jpg
http://www.hawksworld.demon.co.uk/sssc3.jpg http://www.hawksworld.demon.co.uk/sssc4.jpg

leigh

03-08-2002, 07:20 PM

Hey there!
I really like your design - it is so organic. It took me a moment to figure out exactly how it worked. Such an unusual and interesting concept.
I do think that you need a more organic texture to go with it though. More cables and things running along it's surface - in other words, organic shapes in the textures. Just a suggestion :)
Keep up the cool work!
Leigh

hawksworld

03-11-2002, 05:43 PM

Thanks for the suggestion. I'm thinking about starting another version that is more "industrial" and less "star trek".

leigh

03-11-2002, 06:33 PM

Hmmmm... sounds really interesting! More industrial, hey? You mean, less clean ala Star Trek? If you want to move away from that, then use colours like brown, and black - rather that silver. That would be a good start :)
Less specularity, too - thats Star Treks biggest flaw. Everything is so damn shiny!
But keep posting updates!!!!

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