HARDCORE MODELING!: THE DAVID: Body Part

[alshakno]

Here will model started!

[alshakno]

Here is what i done in about 2 hoursmaking suck a fantastic anatomy is realy fantastic
crits are welcome

[MattVogt]

Mohammad great start. Looks like the topology you've created will serve as a great foundation. Keep up the good work (ass pat).

Matt

[alshakno]

the anatomy is so hard :D
but realy fantastic
here is the head base
i know that there are many problems with it so i want ur crits to solve them
tanx for support!!!

[alshakno]

Mohammad great start. Looks like the topology you've created will serve as a great foundation. Keep up the good work (ass pat).

Matt

tanx Matt for ur support
pleas give me more commnets
the sculpture is too complex
more complex than real :D

[siamakcgm]

hey mohammad. cool. just think more and look better. i'll give you comments later. you have 3 weeks to model a head. just spare more time on it. you can do it man:thumbsup: .

best regards

[alshakno]

hey mohammad. cool. just think more and look better. i'll give you comments later. you have 3 weeks to model a head. just spare more time on it. you can do it man:thumbsup: .

best regards

Tanx sia
agree with u
i m looking more at refrences

[fx81]

good start, only comment i can give is dont try to model too many details too early before you get the rough proportions right but keep going since time is short :D

[alshakno]

good start, only comment i can give is dont try to model too many details too early before you get the rough proportions right but keep going since time is short :D

tanx mashru
that is realy important trick
i should pay more attention at that and details will done in zbrush
i want to know my model topology problems
there are lots of it with that
may be when i done the other side it be more like the David!
tanx for ur comment

gl

[alshakno]

Hi
this is how david is shaping
plz give me more comments to make it better
tanx for support

[Bao2]

I think the face is the better of all posts. But it is needed see the eyes placed to see
how it looks.

[fx81]

good work, keep going :)
for crits,
compare the distance between elements and their height relations.
the corner of the lips are softer
you need a small dent in the chin
compare the width of the nose cartilage, it needs to be little wider on the top part.
the tear duct extends a little bit more
hope this helps :)
http://www.fx81.com/temp/4a.jpg

[alshakno]

I think the face is the better of all posts. But it is needed see the eyes placed to see
how it looks.

Tanx Bao
i will do that soon after solving some problems!

[alshakno]

good work, keep going :)
for crits,
compare the distance between elements and their height relations.
the corner of the lips are softer
you need a small dent in the chin
compare the width of the nose cartilage, it needs to be little wider on the top part.
the tear duct extends a little bit more
hope this helps :)


Oh realy tanx
that is so useful
i will solve these problems soon.
i realy need this kind of crits!

[Staszek]

Head look not bad but first thing what is hit in the eyes is shape of the cheeks and jaw.
Around the lips - you have muscles - try to pinch it more in the sides
lower jaw and cheeks are more full

[alshakno]

tanx staszek for support
i will fix that

[alshakno]

i fix some problems in this
i solve some problems with lawe jaw and cheeks
and solve some of problems that fx814 said
tanx guys for supporting me!

[rasmusW]

hey alshakno!

this is coming along nicely.
-but i think his jaw is a bit to broad compared to the scanview.
keep it coming:)

-r

[alshakno]

hey alshakno!

this is coming along nicely.
-but i think his jaw is a bit to broad compared to the scanview.
keep it coming:)

-r

tanx abyss
i will fix that,
i have some problems with the web site that u upload ur wip in that so i cant see them but when reading the other user replys it seems that u are doing a nice process!
gl

[rasmusW]

ohh! sad to hear that.
-hmm, sorry but atm. i don't know how to fix it... haven't heard of anyone else having that problem. but i'll sure take a look at it.

-r

[RobertoOrtiz]

TWO WEEKS TO GO! (MAY 15th):Hardcore Modeling Challenge: THE DAVID! (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=352022)
Just a reminder

-R

[RobertoOrtiz]

FYI

ONE WEEK TO GO :The Hardcore Modeling MINI-Challenge #1: The David (MAY 15th) (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=354766)

ROBERTOS BULLHORN: Expanded RULES for the FINAL RENDER (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=354104)

-R

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