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RubenAl
04-17-2006, 08:03 PM
Hello everyone. This is my first post here. I decided to present a work in progress thats intitled "House in the beach...". Please, dont be to harsh on the critics. I know that I`m a newbie compared to most of the forum`s users. So, any ways I can improve it?

http://fotos.sapo.pt/dragonslayer/pic/00011ds2 (http://fotos.sapo.pt/dragonslayer/pic/00011ds2)


Here`s with other lightning:

http://fotos.sapo.pt/dragonslayer/pic/00012wt3 (http://fotos.sapo.pt/dragonslayer/pic/00012wt3)
RubenAl
04-18-2006, 09:27 AM
Anyone could help me improve it? :)
RubenAl
04-18-2006, 10:13 PM
Anybody?? :shrug:
Nunyas
04-18-2006, 10:53 PM
hmmm... the glass in the window is too clear, if there's glass even in the window. If there's sun light shining directly on the window glass, and it's darker inside the room than it is outside, then we should see reflections of the beach on the window glass when we view the windows from the beach.

The render from the couch facing the window looking at the sun set/rise is really nice, though.
RubenAl
04-20-2006, 04:35 PM
hmmm... the glass in the window is too clear, if there's glass even in the window. If there's sun light shining directly on the window glass, and it's darker inside the room than it is outside, then we should see reflections of the beach on the window glass when we view the windows from the beach.

The render from the couch facing the window looking at the sun set/rise is really nice, though.

Ok, thanks for the critics! Actually it hasnt any glass (not even geometry) in the second image. But I`ll post some changes that I did when I get home.
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