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prozo36
04-15-2006, 10:18 PM
Hey everyone ! Im fairly new to all this , I havent been doing 3d work for long so any advice or help would be greatly respected. I did this scene for one of my classes.

http://photos-537.facebook.com/n18/9/62/60712353/n60712353_30329537_6690.jpghttp://photos-538.facebook.com/n18/9/62/60712353/n60712353_30329538_7463.jpg

Thank you for your time.
PKD
04-16-2006, 06:57 AM
The goround looks too flat. Maybe you can try placing a displacement map for to create some uneveness
ErikSvensson
04-16-2006, 04:09 PM
Love the lightning more on the second image though. :)

The bumps on the ground seems to big, and the tires (i guess it is tires?) seems too untextured with a mix of black tirestyle color, now it looks more or less like sandtires only. i'd suggest a mix or blending between tiretexture and that dirttexture.
Also, bevel all hard edges on the wood, just slightly, no edges are that sticky, say on the woodparts etc. :)
Erik
prozo36
04-16-2006, 05:35 PM
hey thanks much , i know exactly what youre saying , i was having some trouble with the tires and they didnt really come out like i expected , il make shure to take all this into consideration!
ErikSvensson
04-17-2006, 12:15 PM
Welcome! Glad to help.

Don't forget the beveling :)

Erik
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