The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: Martin Dolejs

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My firs sketch-dreamlandscape.I have to make story now.

[nineworld]

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Old woman and child.

[Naisart]

Hi,
You should probably look at some reference for the trees as they look very cartoony right now and I don´t think that is the look you are going for.

I´m not so sure about the compositon, maybe you should place the road to the far left (or right) and see how that looks.

You have set a nice mood. Right now I think the woman looks a bit too masculine (she has broad shoulders and it´s hard to tell she´s female by looking at her face).

I really like how the little girl is looking up at her (grandmother??) filled with confidence that the woman will take care of everything.

Keep working on it and good luck!

[nineworld]

Hi Mumphy.
Thx for your reply.
I was watching for the trees in my head (dream) only.I saw this trees like columns in some architecture space.
Woman is really a little masculin.I have to make another sketches.

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"A little" rough sketch with bandits.

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Graphic experiment of previous rough sketch.

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One of my worksketch

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I still thing,that the first old woman was best.

[nineworld]

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I'm coloring now.I have still too much work on this pictures.Colors are not good.Shadows and highlights must be more expressive.

[jeroentje]

Nice sketches :)

You have a composition problem with your painting. The woman is sitting too close to the edge of your canvas. Adding some more canvas space to the left would help it improve IMO.

Good luck with the challenge.
Jeroen

[domclubb]

i like this alot. It has a dreamlike quality and i love the style. The trees are really nice. The story is slightly dificult to read though. I would like to see the girl looking at the man as he walks away. It looks like she is slightly vacant and that the man has just arrived there. Apart from this though, its great. good luck.

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Hi.This is next level of colouring my picture.I move general motif (old woman and child) to right side near golden section.

[nineworld]

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My next progress of colouring work.

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Hi Guys.
This is my last progress of work.
I have to make some of plants and trees.
The forms of treesshadow are not good.
Cloud on the sky must be more expressiv.

[nineworld]

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My next progress.

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Next level of painting has been added.

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Just for order.

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