Demo Reel Character fixed!!!

[Spirit2029]

Ohh black arts thanks for the suggestions, the head is still in the works too. Maybey seeing the drawing youll get a better idea of where im heading with this. thanks

Spirit2029

[3dflasher]

Another good post with no replies. C'mon people, you all need to change!!!

Spirit2029 - This is such a great start! I love how the body and the armor are turning out. The boots are amazing....They ROCK. The head (like you said) needs a little more work. You need to have a hard crease on the top of the brow. Right now its to rounded, too low, and sticking out too far, similar to the brow found on a Cromagnon (early man). There is also a weird crease on the side of the brow. You definately need to work on the area cause I have found that the eyes and the brow can make or break a model sometimes. She has a GREAT ASS!!! Nice legs too. I cant wait till you texture the face. And Ohh yeah....I will kill you if you dont build the eyes for her. She is such a nice model, that she deserves that the whole eye be built not just a textured sphere.....She is begging you to build her eyes :D
Again great work and I truly admire an artist to give credit when its due, and tell us that this was a Magna Carta character. Lately there has been a lot of credit stealing here and its nice to see it getting better :)

[jiggy]

Who needs arms when you've got a THONG!

[Spirit2029]

Well 3d flaser thanks for the suggestions. Any tutorials you know of for the eye. Yah I over looked the brow thing, been staring at this model for too long. Going to concentrate on getting the armour mostly done this weekend, we'll see. till then....

Spirit2029

[3dflasher]

Here is a link to an eye tutorial

eye tut (http://www.3dluvr.com/content/artz/3dsmax/std/eyes1.php)

[dtek8]

lookin nice,:cool:

if u can capture the dynamism of the sketch then it will totally rock,, looking forward to seeing more:D

dtek

[leigh]

Hey there Spirit2029, this is a really awesome start!!! The detail of the clothing is great, and the actual body form is very good too :)
I'm really looking forward to seeing her textured and animated (if you plan to!)
Keep up the great work :D

[Raul-Reznek]

This is good wor, but I can't see the other images except the profile of the char.

[pluMmet]

really looks great! fantastic clothing and armor...get some texture on that face quickly, it looks to plain compaired to the rest of the work.

can't wait to see her animated (and kickin' arsh)

[Spirit2029]

Thanx for all the replies and encouragement thus far. Dont know why but the site I linked the images on is slow, so if pics dont show just refresh, may take a couple. Ill have an update tonight.

Spirit2029

[parallax]

Thats awesome.
close to the concept art too, although i think the arms are maybe a wee bit to thin. Especially with the armor she wearing.

[Raul-Reznek]

NOW I can see.

1) Body is EXCELLENT, SIMPLY great
2) The head is NOT so good, with some more HARD work on the head it will be PERFECT.
3) I like the 'ass' nice and round
4) Illuminaion isn't so good.

VERY GOOD body armour, love it, REALLY!

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