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lauranonce
04-11-2006, 08:52 PM
Hi there,
this evening I decided to post what I started for fun and for relax a week or 2 ago.
I dedicated very few hours to it, it's not so detailed.
the frog, the flower and the fish are based on photo references.
I've decided to keep the frog bigger than the real size.
It's an energique mix of strong colors that I like very much (remember my ladybug in my CGportfolio)
I'm trying to add the depth that now it's almost not visible
Comments and critiques are as always welcome
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7365/froggy25ap.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

lauranonce
04-12-2006, 10:56 AM
a lil up... I added more lights on water..
http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/6861/froggy30al.th.jpg (http://img462.imageshack.us/my.php?image=froggy30al.jpg)

jmBoekestein
04-12-2006, 05:52 PM
Looks beautiful, are you going to define some sharper edges? :)

lauranonce
04-13-2006, 07:08 AM
Thanks JM :)
Yep a good sharpening is necessary... the problem is: how??? :D
The flower looks like a ghost :wip:
I tried to add some more shadows for enhance the depth of water and leaves.
How is it?

http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/5206/froggy42pw.jpg

hunz
04-13-2006, 12:30 PM
Nice work!

Maybe using smaller and more hardness brushes should resolve the problem with the flower.


Hugs.

GhostInTheMachine
04-13-2006, 06:36 PM
would it be ok if i had a quick go? just to try and resolve that sharpness/depth issue you seem to have.
joe

lauranonce
04-13-2006, 09:22 PM
the issue was cause by the speed I produced the first step of this picture in Artrage(I don't have much time so I try to make speed paint :p ).
I used soft brush and so I didn't prepared a good basis for a detailed version..:cry:
I'm trying to solve this..:banghead:

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/235/froggy51fg.jpg

lauranonce
04-17-2006, 10:36 AM
Added some water reflections on the leaves
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/8479/froggy74vd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
edit:
another pair of modifications, one for fun and another more serious :)
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/7558/froggy85pd.jpg
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/3636/froggy91ag.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

lauranonce
04-20-2006, 11:07 AM
hi there.. I continue with small modifications here and there.

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2889/froggy137kd.jpg

jmBoekestein
04-20-2006, 01:10 PM
Hey really nice progress. Maybe you could only do a really small portion of the image sharp? That could save effort. As if the lens has a very short field of focus. :) heheh, just a thought.

I think the plants might be too visible or bright under the water.

GrafDev
04-27-2006, 12:37 PM
Ciao :)
Direi che ora come nitidezza dei dettagli del fiore ci siamo, magari renderei un pelo piu morbidi i bordi spece nella parte inferiore e, io personalmente, darei un po piu di nitidezza anche ai dettagli delle foglie e della ranocchietta per renderli piu uniformi ... ma questi sono gusti personali :)
cmq un ottimo lavoro mi piace come hai pensato la scena :applause:
Aspetto i prossimi sviluppi , a presto bye bye :thumbsup:
Cris

lauranonce
04-27-2006, 11:30 PM
:) grazie del commento, l'ultima modifica la posto nei lavori finiti..
ah...siamo ospiti qui ed carino parlare in inglese come gli altri :)
so.. thanks for your comment, the last modifications will be seen in the finished work that I'm going to post.

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