The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: Alexander

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All regard!!! Has Found time for participation in this remarkable contest, hope to have time to to pass before the end. Here is my first outline.I think this as "Circus around the land" , this future, where all city metallic and dark, but group rambling actor goes on city and they bloom the motley paint.

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Has Solved to add the details.

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you have an interesting and unique concept here. wish you goodluck.

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it is a little.

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All greetings! Thanks for comments.) here has added characters, I hope looks well, still it is necessary to finish more many.I wish to add some more characters.

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After a long break has found time to undertake work, has decided to stop on these details.

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All greetings!

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It seems to me is not so realistic looks, but I shall try to make better. Still I wish to put on spheres cities, as in the cylinder. We shall look it will be good or not.

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Good start! Perhaps making one of the cities much smaller in comparison will help the distance seem much more vast and epic. I am a little unsure as to the story though so will you add charcters who are to journey to both the cities and cross the canyon? I think the story may be stonger with just one city on the other side of the canyon in the far distance, that way the story telling is clear - that the characters must cross the canyon to get to the city beyond...

Not long left now - so goodluck and enjoy!

Q

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Probably so it is better. At me greater problems with shadows. (

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Yes I agree with you that two cities give to product some uncertainty, I shall try something to think up.) thanks!

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All greetings! The background has decided to leave as is, it is a pity to time a little, therefore to alter any more I shall not be, now there is a work with characters.

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Maybe make the cracks a little thinner as they go into the distance- try thinking of a 'checkerboard' pattern on the ground with all the lines converging into one point on the horzon to see how the perspective should be? You do have a good concept though, keep going! :)

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Thanks for your comments! )

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Some details.

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As time quickly flies.) I Hope tomorrow I shall have time to finish my journey.) or only I shall begin it ;)

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Hi !)
Has a little processed cracks of a canyon. I see that shortage of volume for a composition.

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It is a little more color also it is time to finish.)

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Here my final colors, I shall a little more correct and I shall lay out a final variant. Remains very little!)

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Here my final image. Here the vagrant circus is represented. They send to the big travel on cities of the world. Probably in circus of characters it is more, but in the general representation, the most necessary here are represented. After the first publication of a sketch, at there were many other ideas, but I have decided to finish it. In work used Painter and the Photoshop. I hope to you my product is pleasant. It is very glad that was possible to participate on this competition and in the future I hope still I shall take part. Thanks all who helped advice, they very much did not suffice me. All of success!
(I apologize for my English)

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