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IkerCLoN
04-11-2006, 11:26 AM
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Title: Bedroom #1
Name: Iker J. de los Mozos
Country: Espaņa
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, VRay

This is my first finished interior scene with MAX & VRay. I've been used to model and render exteriors, and we wanted to show a client one of the advantages of CG in interior design.

I took some objects from library, because of the lack of time. The original scene was rendered @ 3000 x 2250 pixels, and render was near 3 hours.

The scene has 5 VRayLights (plane), as I intended to create some studio lighting, not only light coming from the window.
DustinBrown
04-11-2006, 11:49 PM
Looks good, like an IKEA wet dream :)

The blanket calls attention to itself. It looks more like a floor mat than a blanket or comforter. I would suggest making it softer looking by getting rid of those hard edges and "fluffing" up the geometry, and also by making the texture/bump less course.

As I take another look, it kind of bugs me that it has such a lived-in look. Everything about the modeling, lighting, and textures say that this is supposed to be a conceptual interior, but then you added a little disarray to the arrangement of your geometry. I feel like it contradicts the rest of the image.


Good work.


- Dustin Brown
Eclectic
04-12-2006, 01:31 PM
Nice work. Few details need more work (blanket for example doesn't look soft). All in all nice work :)
Jaycee77
04-12-2006, 01:34 PM
Very nice work here. I have to agree on the blanket though, it needs some work, it kinda sticks out froml the rest of the feel of the piece. That aside though very well done.
Silverwing
04-12-2006, 06:16 PM
Nice materials and lighting.
I love the mood. Nice work!
rdias1972
04-13-2006, 02:43 AM
Very good objects.. the scene are so clean and beautifull....
behzad
04-13-2006, 03:44 AM
my only comment is that the cover looks like a carpet on the bed.
other than that it looks nice.
kwills2567
04-15-2006, 02:50 PM
It certainly looks like somewhere I'd like to sleep.

Your bed appears not to have legs, however.

Without known which objects are yours, I can't comment on them, but I do like the overall layout - feels crisp and clean
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