The first attempt at modeling a girl

[Crash]

Your first attempt you say? Hard to belive :p, actually it's very nice, although it needs a lot of tweaking. For example the eyes, and don't forget those little body shape corrections coz the devil's in the details :p, dunno if that saying has any meaning to you :). Keep up the good work, and try to link the images straight to the thread, you'll be suprised how's the commenting people ratio will rise :) . Work work work :wip: . Cheers :beer:

[William GUiLE]

Thank you :bounce:, this is really my first attempt, but... the first attempt at modeling a girl, I've already modeled other things.
Can you be a little more specific, what's wrong with the eyes, and what details may I emprove?
Thank you again!

[Eclipse]

William, it's nice, but I think her head is too big, she has almost alien look. Do you plan to texture her ?

[William GUiLE]

You're right, I did it without reference and with a "manga" inspiration... I'll take the measures better :-).
Yes, I plan to texture her.

[Eclipse]

Good, but the manga characters are with big, huge eyes.

[William GUiLE]

That's true. However, I'll fix her head and make it more realistic.

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