Character: Update

[lerpiedood]

Looks awesome! But a little short.

[Julez4001]

His head may be a little too wide.
Looking great for what you are striving for.
How did u do the skin.

[eFDay]

Head is ok for me even excellent, but yes he is a little short legged.
As u say ,it needs more work but its already very good.

[CGmonkey]

awesome modeling skills!!!

[S E D A H]

Nice modeling .........he looks good................some critics now the head looks a little too big and the arm look too long..........and watch for proportion dont know if its good ...............reminber 8 head high
keep it up

[gnarlycranium]

Originally posted by S E D A H
reminber 8 head high
keep it up

That's only for heroically-proportioned characters-- ordinary humans are 5 or 6!

Man, that looks fabulous... something IS bugging me about the size of the head though, it seems too big somehow... maybe his shoulders aren't broad enough, or his neck is too long... or maybe the head is just plain too big, or I'm hallucinating with stupidity (it's been known to happen).

His legs could use some more detail work, but his shoulders and chest are lovely.

[Spliff_Richards]

I love it. The head looks like somebody or maybe it just has character.

[Spliff_Richards]

The armpits are a bit strange though.

[gnarlycranium]

Originally posted by Spliff_Richards
I love it. The head looks like somebody or maybe it just has character.

Yeah, in the thread where the head was made earlier, everybody agreed it had this Tom Cruise thing going on-- he was one of the references. I think it's the nose that does it.

[JacquesD]

Thanks for your comments guys, that really helped me a lot. :)

I changed the body proportions, shortened the arms and the neck, resized the legs and I modeled basic feet.

I think that's a bit better now, I still have few things to correct though.

What do you think?
http://users.skynet.be/fa009830/Male_f_000.jpg

[Agraba]

Nice modell.
If you look beneath his "big" toes you might se that they look a little bit to thick, or is it just an illusion :hmm:


Anyway great modell so far.

[JacquesD]

Thanks Agraba, I'll improve it. :)
Here's the wireframe:
http://users.skynet.be/fa009830/WireFrame_a_001.jpg

[Koma]

hey he have no dick ,or its this is a integrated jackstrap naaannnn ,just kidding your model is excellent and the wireframe is really clean ,nice job the R ,keep it up man .....:thumbsup: :wip:

[RaEkWon]

auch.. great model rip

now you have som1 to put in that peugeot model eh :)
check pm ! :p

btw I have my doubts about the backside of his legs maybe the heels look 2 fat? Don't know if it matters that much actually cause of the cloths that go over it.
cya

[GladeR]

Hey guy this model is amazing, great work :cool:

as you have told, it need some retouchs but at overall is a great model.

I think, than the improvements mainly you must make it, at the are of chest, you must mark more the transition between the shoulder and the chest, mark slightly the clavicule. mark more the area of the stomach, all this muscles but slightly.

I think than you can use as reference this image of Francisco Cortina, observe the area of the chest at overall, of this way sure you can understand best the things than I have wanted tell you.

http://www.digitalsculptor.net/FinalFantasyMovie/grayMagazine/gray_shaded.jpg

About the shader skin , as have you got this effect? is the sub surface scatering of Hogo Ikari? it work very well.

Keep up it man, I hope than that help you at something.

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