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theartspark
04-04-2006, 01:19 PM
http://stu.aii.edu/%7Eaa1810/crystalhanna/forum_pics/tisiphone2.jpg

Hi all,

I'm looking for crits to help improve this pic of Tisiphone, one of three Furies from mythology. I started her a while back but due to work, I was unable to finish her properly. Any suggestions would be appreciated, thanks.

Changes made so far:

1. More definition added in the left and right hand/knuckles
2. Darkened the kilt on the sides to unflatten it
3. Blended the colors on the bridge and sides of nose
4. Toned down the highlight on the bridge of the nose
5. Evened out the look of the left horn to match more closely with the right horn
6. Deepened the eyes a little, and added some light shading to the inside of the eye
7. Went over the scourge a little to define it a little more

kiwi8
04-05-2006, 01:18 PM
the background color tone and the body color tone is very similar, she is blending into the background. The body is not symmetrical, and head is needs to be positioned better to her neck. one of her tits is bigger then the other :)

theartspark
04-05-2006, 07:33 PM
Good call on the chest kiwi. As for the arms, I'm figuring out just how to even them up more. Will post update soon...

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