Plane/Car/Hovercraft [WIP]

[Agraba]

Hmmmm, 30 + views and still no replys guy, come on :annoyed:

here is a small uppdate and i do not mind hearing some crits.

[MaskTX]

OK mr Cloud:) See what it would look like in the end :wip:

[Agraba]

And one from the back.

It is still not done if you are wondering :)

http://uploader.axsstudios.com/images/plane_prototype_02_back.jpg

[Agraba]

100 + views and no more than 1 reply :)

Should i take it that it is perfect, which i seriously doubt.
Well, guess i will have to uppdate untill it looks interesting.

[Xodex]

i want that thing :airguitar :love:

[BiTMAP]

perhaps some more hard edges.

[Dave Black]

It looks pretty cool, but I'm not sure what you want us to say. It's your design, and it's not textured, there is no wireframe, and not a whole lot of details.

Give us some updates, shaded wireframes, and some more to look at and you'll get more replies.

Looks cool so far.

-3DZ

:D

[Agraba]

Thanks for the few C&C's i got.
Right now i am thinking of making it a really fast car with jet engines :buttrock: but i have a few doubts.

And of cource there is a small matter of doors (Can't belive i did not think about making the doors) :rolleyes:

Cource if i made this a spaceship it would have the doors at the bottom so that would not be that big of a problem :D

Here is pic of my wire, this is of cource before i meshsmooth it (for all the newbs out there ;) ).

EDIT: Oh yeah and i have no friggin idea how to compress images good :annoyed:

[Xirdion]

I often got tjhe same issues when i start to "play" without the guidelines... but i think that the more i "play" this way the more interesing thing are created and i've go to say thay this is great fun and a way to well know the tools... just a thought

greetz

[ToddD]

It definitely could use some seams and some texture. It looks very CG because everything is soo clean and shiny. Maybe a large engine exhaust (like a jet) in the center of the rear section would help to balance out those little vents in the front.

[gnarlycranium]

Originally posted by Agraba
100 + views and no more than 1 reply :)
That's about normal, actually. Usually it takes more than 100 before a reply comes in.

Well, it's shiny and nifty whatever it is.. I wouldn't worry about doors myself, I'd make it a hovercraft and put a seam around the cockpit so it opens like a fighter jet would... but that's me.

[j3ro3n]

Xirdion, you have thé most disturbing avatar I have ever encountered...

Congratz :thumbsup:

[Agraba]

Did not get much done, just a bit of adding in the modell.
Still building though :wip:

One from the front:
http://miranda.bsd.st/~aimer/prototype_03.jpg

And one from the back:
http://miranda.bsd.st/~aimer/prototype_03_back.jpg

Have to get this one done :wavey:

[PureFire]

I love the front and the side but the rear is such a letdown....make it as secksie as the rest :bounce: great work

[Agraba]

Yeah you are right, the rear is no good.
I am having a real hard time coming upp with a good idea for the rear.
Right now i am thinking of making that opening in the rear a big jet engine but then again i have to ponder over some other ideas :hmm:

Better get back to some Maxing.

[gnarlycranium]

Fill in the rear with... um... three big fat turbines! Yeah!

[Agraba]

Update from the front, the back will have to whait a bit.

http://miranda.bsd.st/~aimer/prototyp_04.jpg

I am unsure if this is an improvement :hmm:

Yeah well, better get back to work :wip:

[Agraba]

A tiny uppdate.

[Agraba]

Come on guys, some C&C's are most welcome.

A tiiiny uppdate:
http://miranda.bsd.st/~aimer/prototype_05.jpg

I think that this is my last uppdate for the front of it.
Now i gotta start on that back :wip:

[Rhettro]

You want critiques - You got'em LOL! Overall I like the feel of you model, but if it is to work in a planet with an atmosphere it's not going to go far with that drag inducing front end. Remove the bottem lip and you have a convincing jet boat, otherwise tone down the upper lip up front. Granted this is a fantasy vehicle but you don't see many airplanes shaped like parachutes. This model looks a little sketchy, If this was manufactured there would be a set thicknesses for the "trim" around window openings etc. That's just a fancy way of saying that you could tighten up your details a little bit. I personally prefer you first models design for the front windshield sans moonroof. Other than that, I like the styling of your craft and the way you've rendered it.

[EvilE]

I really wanna drive fly whatever around with that vehicle but not at night cause i dont see any lamps :p

EE

[jfalconer]

I've been thinking about it for awhile, and came to the conclusion that the only way to get into that thing would be a scene similar to the one in Minorty Report with the red car. :curious:

[BiTMAP]

possibly give it more panels, let it feel "built" that really has more grounding in realitity then perfection :D, and i'd suggest the upper lip on the front not be there, just a panel over something, like sensors or guidance or something... make it feel like there is something inside (basicly less shapes carving "into" your model.

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