character: anime style girl

[devonpis]

and...

[MaskTX]

I like her face, but her body... Try to work on her body a little more and then make a clothes. Good work:thumbsup:

[fireman]

lookin very good devonpis! :thumbsup: i must say yer anotomy is spot on! cant wait to see her with clothes on! (i can't beleive i said that) :bounce:

[vorlon]

Her anatomy is no problem since it's an anime style you're after, not photo realistic. But the only thing I notice that is odd is the top part of her butt cheek, in the straight on back view (right most picture), it seems the two butt cheeks are kind of far apart, instead of typical round butt cheeks that touch each other.
But I am only nitpicking your great looking models here, since she'll wear clothes anyway.

I like anime style character, and yours is one of the few I've seen that i like. How long did it take you to design and model her to the final product?

[Titan]

ohh I like this
..looks really nice so far for that exaggerated anime style....
the only thing that sticks out as needing attention is the buttocks...seems a little od shaped..or maybe the cleft is too wide..

I love the face and the rest though
great job!!

[devonpis]

hey guys, thx for the comments

titan and vorlon, i agree that the butt is a bit "square" now, maybe the skin is not quite sticking to the bone, i'll fix that next time around, anyway, that's a good point.:)

now still trying to figuring out her outfit...since up to this point i just follow the tutorial, for me it's quite challenge to make the clothing ( i never do that b4), hope to reply to this thread with some pics very soon

love ur encouragement guys:eek:

[NelsonInomvan]

Hellooooooo baby :cool:

[HapZungLam]

proportion. the torsal is too long.

anime girl mostly has longlong leg

[lerpiedood]

She is looking pretty good. The body and head are great, cept for but, but I believe the hair line starts just a little too high.

[proton]

Great model....the body looks great to me...except for the Butt crack......excellent work!

[ckaos@om]

Really love it, except for the points stated before.
She reminds me of "Kid" from Chrono Cross a LOT !:love:
keep it up! cheers !:thumbsup:

[devonpis]

happy new year:beer:
i just finished some of the clothings, i'm still modelling some of the equipments and bracer
i wonder u guys like this style or not, cuz i wawt to make some different from the original joan of arc

[devonpis]

and

[Spliff_Richards]

I think she looks better without the clothes.:)

[DaliFan]

hehehe

very good job man, I like it

[MrPunkin]

I seriously like the clothes, they fit I think. Very anime-punk-flight attendent-ish

[aurora]

I love the clothing style. It could use alittle more color to it but I think that jewlery would take care of some of that. I usually don't get into anime style characters but this one for some reason has really grabbed me.
GREAT JOB:applause:

[proton]

Great Clothes!

[devonpis]

thx for the comments, guys:wavey:

wooo. just finished the texturing, and made some equipment, want to give her a pistol

[devonpis]

more

[aurora]

Oh yeah! Now that adds alot of life and vibrance to her. I love it!!!! I still think she needs a braclet though. Just alittle something to draw attention down those great arms of hers.

[Jonathan]

This is great work, I really dig this model. I too was going to mention the gluts but those clothes really bring her to life.

[IDownupI]

me whant wire:wip: in the head

[Titan]

is the skin a painted map or a procedural?
looks wonderful man, love it!!:)

[Remi]

I like it.....get rid of the black toes though...maybe make it look like pantyhose or something...:thumbsup:

[devonpis]

yeah, i also think that the arms is quite bare right now, i still try to find a right pair of braclet, it would be nice if u guys can give me some interesting idea

titan:most of the skin is procedual, only the face, the tarso and the clothes is mapped.
the texture of clothes is just blank except the checkers, and i apply bump map for the wrinkles, so the texturing is quite simple for this model

remi:nice idea, i'll try to make sth and see how it looks like

IDownupI: here u go, i just follow the sub-d method of Joan tutorial and using the same template for the face, though i make a little bit variation

[devonpis]

and close up

[devonpis]

face-side

[WarAngel]

Looks very nice! She looks 13 naked though... Ehh what ever my girl is 13 (i'm 15).

[devonpis]

thx warangel, u guys ar so young

well, almost done, rigged the clothing and start to test the lighting, and probably will set up a scene too. thinking on sth like a dark alley

any advise is welcome

[devonpis]

back view

[Harrad]

very good. its a good tut, i used it before and made a pritty sweet model, but got stuck on the head.

problems- she looks really plasticy, take the spec way down. also the lighting. use a shadow map to soffen the main shadow, as it looks to harsh and try some very low intenisity lights to add some fill.

have you got a toon shader? might be intresting to see what it looks like in toon shaded.

keep up the good work.

-matt:surprised

[Remi]

The toes look better...and I think your style is your own...keep it...I like the lighting and texturing...I don't think you need to change much...good work all around...great job and I can't wait to see some more of your stuff...:thumbsup:

[aurora]

Thats what I mean with the braclets!!!:applause: I love the new poses too! I also agree with Remi everything looks great even the toes which I never even noticed till I believe it was Remi, mentioned it. Like I said before I normally don't get into anime style char's but this one is fantastic. Are you going to do any animition seq's of her for us?

[devonpis]

some updates, just set up a simple scene and tweaked the lighting, what's left is the pistol!

harrad: i also want to try the toon style too, but i don't have max5 right now, maybe try later. have to change many setting if using max4

thx remi and aurora, i don't think i'll do the animation for this one...it takes too long for me to render an animation

[devonpis]

the scene

[Blackassheep]

Wonderful Sexy looking character. Got to love something about the Anime young look that remains sexy in some way. Nice Work Bud.

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