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jonone
04-01-2006, 04:06 PM
Ioan Dumitrescu is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/journey_begins/view_entries.php?challenger=11299)

Latest Update: Shading (Textured and lit): face
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1148737299_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=3585317#post3585317)

jonone
04-09-2006, 01:16 AM
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a try at getting the concept working:)
will start modelling soon.
C&C welcome:)
GL to every1 who's participating!

Womgoose
04-09-2006, 01:22 AM
Nice technical shading there ;)
What's the story behind your concept?

jonone
04-09-2006, 01:34 AM
Well the story is pretty straightforward(aparently:) )
at this time i was thinking of a epic journey from another point of view.As its pretty late ill just make it short :D.When some1 starts reading a book ,lets say with all kinds of adventures,and entertaining ,captivating things ,that person,doesnt matter if its a child or a grown up, enters the books universe and reading it he leaves the real world for an imaginary world,passes from non-fictional to fictional..profan to sacred and so on.I will be macking a boy embarcking on this epic quest,which can be seen as a journey from childhood to growing up:).
thats all going to sleep:)
Cheers.

jonone
04-12-2006, 06:12 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1144861932_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1144861932_large.jpg)

Hi,
started working and this is what i got so far of the "environment".alot more to be detailed,will try getting something nice:).will start macking the little boy and the plant-vine that will be growing out of the book:)

vady
04-12-2006, 06:59 PM
I like the concept a lot and I think it has the potential to be great :bowdown: (http://forums.cgsociety.org/misc.php?do=getsmilies&wysiwyg=1&forumid=0#)
From the samples I can only imagine how the final image will turn up
Looking forward to it!!
All the best!!:thumbsup:

jonone
04-13-2006, 08:20 PM
ty Vady,hope so to:)
im working on the kids concept and overall design
will post as soon as i get the scetch scaned ,and modeled:S

simovici
04-14-2006, 10:10 AM
Mult noroc si bafta.:thumbsup:

Eratrioch
04-15-2006, 09:52 PM
nice concept and good modeling . good luck !

burpy
04-20-2006, 05:29 PM
Wow that's quite a difficult concept to make an image out of! I like the modelling start so far, can't wait to see how you'll pull this off.:)

jonone
04-22-2006, 08:31 PM
heia ty for your comments
ill start posting again after Easter is over here:)

smokie
04-22-2006, 10:57 PM
Argh...Wish I had ur idea. Really has petential to look very nice. Looking good so far. No crits yet. Keep it up.

jonone
04-28-2006, 03:54 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1146236078_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1146236078_large.jpg)

Hei all,back from the holidays with a quick conept of my boy^^and some accesories.

jonone
05-03-2006, 11:44 AM
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hei
im back with some small updates.
a little render to give me a better idea on how to complete the scene.
btw sry for the low quality..i didnt see it when i saved:S(and didnt want to render it again:) )
More updates coming v soon.

jonone
05-03-2006, 02:04 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1146661473_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1146661473_large.jpg)

Another update on the boys face(still need some tweaking at the mouth),his boots and backback,kinda raw,but adding the details as i go.
currently finishing the clothes,and working on the plant.
will post some textured and lit pics soon.
crits and comments welcome.
cheers

vady
05-04-2006, 07:46 PM
nice modeling man.hope the textures will match it:)
looking forward to the finished img!
bafta multa!

oceanbluesky
05-04-2006, 09:45 PM
Hey Ioan! Great work...really like the expansive feel to your scene. The details, twists, and turns of the surfaces on your character's boots are great, very organic and real. Good luck!

jonone
05-09-2006, 01:59 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1147179549_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1147179549_large.jpg)

small update on the plant,been busy finishing the boy...now trying to get best proportions for him:S
Suggestions,crits,comments are welcome:)
cheers!

jonone
05-10-2006, 06:40 PM
Vady,Ocean, Thanks guys:)

oceanbluesky
05-10-2006, 08:26 PM
Hey Ioan! Really cool concept you have going here...looking forward to seeing the boy placed within the scene. Hope you have enough time to finish (and that you are going to join the next challenge when it starts so you'll be able to continue to exhibit your creative concepts)...will the vines interact with the boy in any way? Really like the effort you've made to detail everything, especially his boots and the books. Great drawing skills too. Good luck!

jonone
05-12-2006, 05:06 PM
hei again ocean!Thx for the nice comments mate,i appreciate it.
i hope ill finish it aswell:)
havent decided if the vines will interact with the kid,but probl wont(dont want to transform my img in to a clise hehe).I am almost happy with his pose and will post some updates soon:)
Cheers!

jonone
05-13-2006, 08:10 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1147547433_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1147547433_large.jpg)

hei all,
I ve worked on the pose,wasnt very satisfyed and remade the whole thing:coat,arms,legs(which ill post soon)today(nice saturday i had:) )
So i think ill stay on this 1...the char walks along his universe with his backpack over his shoulder,admireing,thinking....
Did alot of scetching in PS to give me a better idea about the colors,atmosphere,composition.
Still thinking on what to do with the floor(what should it be..) and pilar(what textures to use)
Anyway,ill try posting more ,but kinda slow comp and i prefer modeling instead of waiting for a render hehe.
Crits,comment,suggestions are welcome!

jonone
05-14-2006, 07:59 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1147633155_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1147633155_large.jpg)

heias,
back with a quick update...for now i think im gonna stick to this pose.
Still not sure about the light.
Crits,comments,suggestions are welcome!

jonone
05-15-2006, 07:51 PM
Hei all
gonna update tomorrow
finished the boy's hand + some last details on him and im gonna let this baby render tonight the turntable+ some textures!yeah!:D
hope comp wont crash till i wake up,wish me luck:D

simovici
05-17-2006, 12:42 PM
Nice, beautiful si de ce nu, frumos!

But hurry up, there are only 10 days t othe final.

Noroc

jonone
05-17-2006, 07:31 PM
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Hi all,long time no update...
was about to quit this 1...problems with comp made me loose all my work on textures and some lighting tests(which i didnt think of saving on my usb as i did with the others..:( ) But i sayd what the heak and after a break i restarted working on them today and atm im rendering the turntable...hopeing for a miracol to finish in time hehe.

jonone
05-17-2006, 07:45 PM
Thx simovici for the nice words:)
yeah hope ill manage to finish it...
Multa bafta si tie!!

jonone
05-18-2006, 10:48 AM
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this is gonna be the final scene..ofc with some more books,details etc...

MT-Cup
05-18-2006, 11:14 AM
I really love this concept. Personally, it means a lot to me. I would love to see you finish this.

deltaindigo
05-18-2006, 12:32 PM
Nice modelig. I like the clothes. I'll be looking forward to see more.
succes!

jonone
05-18-2006, 08:27 PM
MT Cup :thx,ill sure try to finish it:)
deltaindigo :thx alot ,bafta multa!:)

jonone
05-19-2006, 08:31 PM
finaly my turntable was submited! check it out:p Turntable (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/journey_begins/view_entries.php?challenger=11299)
working on the textures ...more updates in the weekend!
still dunno what to do with the floor....
suggestions,crits,comments are welcome!

ilusiondigital
05-19-2006, 10:10 PM
Great modeling skills

jonone
05-20-2006, 11:21 AM
ilusiondigital : hei and thx for the kind words:D
GL with your jorney its looking good:D!
salutari din romania!

jonone
05-20-2006, 05:10 PM
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had the time to leave it and render out something which i wont change hehe.
still working on others to fit the mood i imagined..more updates tomorrow.
C&C welcome

jonone
05-21-2006, 01:37 AM
bigger update coming tomorrow!

jonone
05-21-2006, 09:17 PM
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update on the bookcase.made it a bit lighter in this render ...but in the final 1 it will go along with the books,be more dark.

MT-Cup
05-21-2006, 09:46 PM
Getting there... :)

jonone
05-22-2006, 08:31 PM
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update on the pillar.
School is macking it harder to do much atm:(

jonone
05-23-2006, 04:33 PM
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small update on the scene,did alot of test renders(thats because i have to study for my final programming test,which is this thursday,and i found out on monday:D)
still dunno what to do with the floor.
crits,suggestions,anything is most welcome!!

MT-Cup
05-23-2006, 04:39 PM
Very nice updates! :thumbsup: Almost there.

jonone
05-23-2006, 07:09 PM
MT Cup: Thanks alot for the encouregment,means alot:D cheers

simovici
05-24-2006, 07:35 AM
Nice upates.

But only one suggestion and it's only my personal opinion. Maybe you should make those books and woods so clean, oyu should put more dust there.

good luck

jonone
05-24-2006, 10:25 AM
hei simovici
thx for the crit,but the final scene is going to be at night so its gonna be hard to notice dust and things on the books ,but will do some details and things with it,somewhere more noticable.
keep the crits coming!
Cheers!

vady
05-24-2006, 05:07 PM
nice work!
hope it turns out how u want to,and that u finish:D
bafta multa;)!

jonone
05-25-2006, 03:36 PM
vady:thx mate,hope i finish to:D
merci pt comments:D

tredistudio
05-26-2006, 10:21 AM
Great Idea and sketches, you are a grate drawer.

best regards and Good Luck

jonone
05-26-2006, 11:02 AM
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hei all,back after getting my programming degree(woooot:D),eyes hurt ,so i just had some rough lighting tests.kinda decided on what it will be.couldnt let it have a nice render..would have taken to long,and i intend to finish this,so had to make it quick:)

jonone
05-26-2006, 01:45 PM
tredistudio: heia thx for stoping by,and thx for the nice words:)
GL with your image aswell,its great!

MT-Cup
05-26-2006, 07:20 PM
Oh l like this dark moody lighting. Might be just a bit too dark, hard to tell without the character there, but I really do like it. :thumbsup:

jonone
05-26-2006, 08:53 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1148673180_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1148673180_large.jpg)

another rough render(no gi,no postprod),just to get an better idea of whats needed.
C&C most welcome



P.S: turntable up

MT-Cup
05-26-2006, 09:06 PM
You do need to light your character a little better. You've got a very dramatic and moody feel, but we're losing the wonderful details you have put in here. Perhaps you'd consider a small soft light from the foreground?

jonone
05-26-2006, 09:17 PM
MT Cup : heia ,first wanna thnak you for the constant support and encouregment:).cheers!
yeah i am thinking of how to make some details appear,and did some region tests with GI and most of them do show up,but i will for sure put an extra light on the char and ajust the others so he doesnt seem out of place or that its the only thing receiving light.
Keep the crits coming pls!:D




P.S: turntable up

jonone
05-27-2006, 08:28 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1148714934_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/11299/11299_1148714934_large.jpg)

another rough,render
still alot to be textured,and need something to fill the back.
C&C most welcomed!



P.S turntable up

MT-Cup
05-27-2006, 12:24 PM
You could put another bookcase in the back to close it off. Personally, the way it is currently gives the illusion of an endless corridor of shelves. I really think that's in keeping with your image, unless you want to put a very faint outline of a door with light behind it in the very distant back. :shrug: I like the feel of it as is. Just a bit more tweaking of the light. I'd say you are very close to finished.

jonone
05-27-2006, 12:35 PM
MT Cup : yeah,i think im gonna keep that endless corrdor,but will put some small lights in the bookcases to give some interesting tints on the books
yes im working as im writing this ,on the light on the char(want the folds and some details to show up more).
Thanks alot for the crits!keep them coming ,they are helping me alot!cheers

jonone
05-27-2006, 02:41 PM
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working at full speed to have time to render:)
did the face texture today.
C&C welcome!!

MT-Cup
05-27-2006, 02:45 PM
:thumbsup: Keep going!

jonone
05-27-2006, 05:22 PM
and now im on the last 50m:scream:
started rendering..now i wait:):bounce:
MT Cup :thx man for standing around my thread!(u ve been really helpfull!,both moraly and with the crits:) cheers!)

MT-Cup
05-27-2006, 05:37 PM
Glad I could help at least a little. ;) It'll be great to see you wrap this up!

jonone
05-27-2006, 08:51 PM
hei guys,wanted to say there wont be any final pic:(
comp couldnt handle the render,max crashed twice about a quarter way,and im sure even if i try rendering again it wont finish it before the deadline:(but atleast the parts i saw were looking as i wanted and had the right feel and most fited into the scene.Im sry i couldnt get it done earlyer but RL was as always a bitch,and it was pretty hard to study for my exams(last highschool year:S) and finish this,even tho i believed i would ,till the 2 max crash.It was great participating on this journey,learned alot!Anyway ill try my luck next competition,and till then ill try working more on my texturing,rendering,lighting skills(in the holiday to come:) )
Thanks alot to the ppl that were constantly supporting me with ideas,crits,encoureging p.m's
THANKS GUYS!,sry if i ve let u down,hard for me aswell,really liked how it was turning out in the last render:(
Special thx to MT Cup,and oceanbluesky. /bow
CYA all take care:)

MT-Cup
05-30-2006, 02:41 PM
Sorry to hear that. :sad: I was so looking forward to seeing this completed. Have you tried just rendering it in sections and then compositing in something like photoshop or gimp?

Either way, best of luck to you! I really enjoyed this scene.

jonone
05-30-2006, 07:16 PM
i did try ,but those 2 crashes took alot of valuable time,and there was none left for a other try:(
After im done with my exams,im getting a new comp,will refine my image render it out,and post it on cgtalk along with some other work:)
take care MT,i hope u will also be in the next challange:D and come up with something great!
Cheers!

MT-Cup
05-30-2006, 10:37 PM
Thanks and good luck with the new computer. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.

oceanbluesky
05-31-2006, 03:20 AM
Hey Ioan! (Good luck with your final exams!) Looking forward to seeing this image completed -- it really works in the partial renders you have posted. Very high-quality work. Hope to see more of your artwork in a future challenge (and from your new computer!)...cheers!

jonone
06-03-2006, 10:18 AM
thanks:)

/bow

MT-Cup
06-24-2006, 04:22 PM
Hello Ioan!

Just dropping in so you know I'm still interested in seeing you move this forward when you have a chance and the computer to do it with.

Hope your exams went well.

Take care!

jonone
06-28-2006, 09:02 PM
hei MT!
2 tests are done(got max grade:D on them)
4 to go in the coming weeks(working my ass of to get them right)
thx again for the nice words mate!
atm kinda no time for 3d:( just made some drawings which came out cool,warcraftish:) will scan em and maybe put them on cg and send them at blizz fan artwork:twisted: :)
take care!:thumbsup:

MT-Cup
06-29-2006, 12:53 AM
I'll have to go take a peek. I love to do 2d a lot too. Sometimes it's just good therapy.

jonone
06-30-2006, 06:29 PM
well i uploaded them in my portofolio
hope u like them:)
gonna make a thread (if i should dare:) )

EDIT: made the thread :)
LINK HERE (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=376030)

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