And again another female character

[Conni]

and another image with more perspectives

[swadepgh]

Nice detail on the stomach. Side view looks a bit strange though. Perhaps the abs stick out just a bit too far? The angle between the buttocks and back looks to be a bit sharp.

Also I think the face could be wider, but perhaps she just has a narrow face.

All in all, nice work.

[Lukashi]

very nice, nose could use a bit of work

[Conni]

Thanks for your replies so far.
I smoothed the ankle between the back and the buttocks a bit and I made her abs not sticking out so far. The nose and the face is currently in progress. Updates are coming soon. Keep commenting, please!
-Conni

[Laa-Yosh]

There are some serious anatomical issues with this model... Proportions and forms of the body aren't correct. I suggest you to use some good references - sometimes our eyes can fail us.

I've retouched your image a bit to give you an idea of how it should look like. Mind you, it's not perfect, but it might help a bit...

[Conni]

THX again, I used the retouched image and a some reference pictures to alter the proportions a bit. I hope the form and proportions are better now.
However, I would have expected more feedback or is the model already ready for texturing and animation without further improvements ;) ?

[Conni]

And here is a new face-closeup. I partially rebuild the nose. The nose looks better now, at least that's my humble opinion. Furthermore, I tried to make the face look wider.
Any more ideas which areas I have to improve?

[Joril]

I think the back of her head is to flat.
Looks a bit eggy in 3/4.

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