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seedra4
12-25-2002, 06:45 PM
Spawn Character....

Modeled and rendered in Maya 4.5

http://www.manar-tawam.com/misc/SpawnPose.jpg

To download a 2Megs turntabe avi for the character, follow this link :
http://www.manar-tawam.com/misc/spawn.avi

comments and critique are most welcomed...

stevej2k
12-25-2002, 07:40 PM
Wow thats a really nice model.


the only thing that really sticks out to me is the chains. spawn seems to have chains with much bigger links the ones he usually has are more chunky , not so fine and delicate as the ones you have there. *feel free to correct me if i am wrong*


apart from that. he looks very grounded and balanced especially in the first pose


:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Error323
12-25-2002, 07:41 PM
:buttrock: :buttrock: :bounce: :buttrock: :buttrock:


OOooh yeah!!!!!

Corn Dog
12-25-2002, 07:55 PM
I like it, I like it. Spawn kicks ass. But to be picky

The chains need beaffing up, his knees look thin, and that boot thingy is just odd. Are those granades or avocados on his belt?

But very good all the same keep at it. It'll be hard to get the cape and the glowiness of the eyes/his magic.

seedra4
12-25-2002, 08:09 PM
Thanks stevej2k...
I think u r right... Spawn style should be better with a thicker chains... I'm gonna keep the old chains the way thy r, and add new chains comming out of his body.... probably ending with hooks and knifes....
hmmm... did'nt occur to me but sounds cool... thanks for the inspiration... :D

Corn Dog...
The things on the belt actualy are avocados... a backup plane for a long winter with nothing to eat :annoyed: ...

bigbad
12-25-2002, 10:11 PM
It´s supercool.

But he looks like he´s been in hawaii. He´s too bright. Make his textures darker and ad a littel glow effect around his eyes. Bigger everything. He´s supposed to be from HELL. Not San Fransisco.

Great work seedra.

Kepp on working :wip: .

seedra4
12-25-2002, 11:46 PM
bigbad... I guess this Spawn is a high class Spawn ;)
No realy... to increase the size of the muscles at this stage is almost imposible beacuse of all the artillery stuff rapped arround the body, but I'm gonna add more chains and weapons to make him look more MASSIVE...
keep checking for new updates... :beer:

three
12-26-2002, 12:13 AM
First of all... really SUPER model. I love it. :xtreme:

Second. Do I have to remind all of you that Spawn is just a part of a huge army of Spawns, so a difference in musculature and look will have to be taken into account.
The boot-thing he has is really well done, but should have a bit of another shoe/boot, sticking out from the bottom, just the toes or something.
The chains NEED a beefing up. He's from hell, he's not supposed to look nice, and those chains may be chic, but not brutal. Big fat chains with the skulls on the end, that's the Malebolgie-way.
The textures need a darker tint, and the glow from the eyes are essential :)

But all of this are details. The all and all model are really well done, the muscles are perfect, and so are the spikes.

:thumbsup:

karabo
12-26-2002, 12:16 AM
I think he's a little skinny to be Spawn, he needs to be more muscular but I understand that at this late stage it would be hard to buff him up so I guess it will have to stay like that.
The textures need a lot of work as the others have said. Bloody him up a little and put gashes and wounds all over the place, this guy is from hell. Just dirty everything up a little.
Right now he looks like some guy in a spawn costume for halloween.
Just like everyone said, the chains need to be thicker and more heavy looking. And put some blood stains on them.

CJ
12-26-2002, 12:39 AM
Wow that looks really nice! :applause: I wouldn't say that everything needs to be bigger to be "Spawn" though. Chains... yes. Bigger muscles? Ehh really I think the only thing muscle wise that could use some beefing up on is the bicep area of the arms and the knee and calf area of the legs. I know with the ammo straps and everything attached it would be difficult to increase muscle size, though I think the biceps would be fairly easy as the only thing attached is the bracelets. With the knees and calves, maybe it's just the render or the angle but, they look a little slim and fragile for Spawn. Though again would think it wouldn't be too hard to tweak those as the only other parts affected would be the upper ends of the boots and the 1 bracelet. Aside from the above it all looks great! Would love to see some other poses of him! :thumbsup:

facial
12-26-2002, 01:25 AM
Coool work ,I love this Character.. :applause:

alaa ahmed
12-26-2002, 01:45 AM
cool :thumbsup: nise :thumbsup: fantastic:thumbsup:
great modeling:bounce: :bounce:


تستحق اخي فعلا اربع نجوم عن جداره وانا بنزل دلوقتي ملف الفيديو
(وخليهم يعرفوا ان في عرب زيهم واحسن منهم كمان):applause:
وتقبل شكري

Cyn
12-26-2002, 05:56 AM
This is my first comment...ever..so ya I may not have much say, but at any rate his neck seems a little fat considering the rest of him is quite lean (for spawn anyways). Other than that awesome job on the modelling, and the colors could go for a lil upity in the contrast me thinks.

Way to go!

:thumbsup:

Null_Object
12-26-2002, 07:28 AM
To each his own man I think its down right bad ass:buttrock:

sampi
12-26-2002, 08:54 AM
yeah
Graet work .
I like it :applause:

attaarik
12-26-2002, 09:04 AM
hello manar I am TAREK of maxforums;) your works is super :thumbsup:

nadeemmar
12-26-2002, 09:22 AM
marhaba manar

good work bro

nice to see more arabs joining 3d world

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

تهاني على هذا التصميم الرائع

libya 3D
12-26-2002, 09:35 AM
عملك رائع يا منار
المفروض ياخذ 5 نجوم
Great job
5 stars :applause: :applause:

ZELGADIS
12-26-2002, 12:41 PM
;) wooww

:thumbsup: i wish to see

final result .:)

Laptop
12-26-2002, 01:07 PM
:thumbsup: :bounce:

:bounce: :bounce:

:bounce: :bounce:


Great Job !!!

Cgtalk
12-26-2002, 01:16 PM
i like it its gr8 work

keep it up

and i'm waiting the updates


اولا اهنيك على العمل الرائع جدا و بالتوفيق في دنياك و اخرتك ان شاء الله تعالى
و لكن اخي عندي لك سؤال واحد

بدي اسألك انت درست تخصص له علاقه بالتصمييم ببرامج التصميم و لا بس عن هوايه بديت تصمم ؟؟؟؟؟

و الى الامام :applause: :buttrock:

wgreenlee1
12-26-2002, 01:18 PM
Great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

seedra4
12-26-2002, 02:22 PM
wowww... so meny replys... :D
thanks guys for the comments which I found very usful; I already started with some adjusment on the character, should be done anytime this eavning or tommorow morning and hopefuly it should show up good... :shrug:

أما الشباب العرب.... فالقصة مختلفة تماما... ;)
عن جد طار عقلي من الفرح لما شفت الردود العربية, مشكورين من كل قلبي :applause:
أخ سي جي توك, أنا خريج كلية الفنون الجميلة بدمشق... و مع الأسف دراستي في هذا المجال ليست أكاديمية بل إبتدأت عن هواية...
مع أطيب التحيات... :wavey:

Aljoker
12-26-2002, 02:54 PM
waaw ,,

seedra thats great job, you raly desearve all that relpies ...

keep going man :thumbsup:

Edin
12-26-2002, 05:05 PM
Wow, I love the modeling and whatnot. I agree on the chains bit, but I believe that the main problem is he's TOO LIGHT...

he looks a bit like a happy go lucky spawn, he's light blue.

make him black, make him DARK...

Alevice
12-26-2002, 09:20 PM
Well, being an almost spawn hardcore fan, i think it has some flaws, mostly if yours is based over Al Simmons. Check this pictures as references:

http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/artpreview.detail5.jpg
http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/hellspawn9l.jpg
Spawn wields mostly really big artillery. Only time you see him using grenades is more likely against a whole army (he would use stealth techniques intead of fighting agaisnt 'em)

http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/cover_capullo.jpg
http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/cover_mcfarlane.jpg
I dont know if you can notice it, but he has claws. Or pointy fingers.

http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/hellspawn10l.jpg
http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/hellspawn11l.jpg
As for the end of the chains, in the normal comic they seem to never end, more likely in they return to its body instead of having a last link. In the Hellspawn issues he seems to have some hoos (more like scythes) and the end, though.

http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/spawn106l.jpg
http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/spawn111l.jpg
http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/spawn_large.jpg
http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/blood_and_shadows1.jpg
He has this 'M' at its body, and seemingly, all spawns has it. The cloak is also really important as well as that glow in the eyes. The suit is more darker and is more likely the symbiote of Venom (spiderman), like if iot was petroleum or oil. In the same way he has this big boot, he also has this big 'glove' onto the OPPOSITE SIDE (i.e.: right arm, left leg). And it seem that while the body is stronger, the face is much skinnies (mostly because he has a skull as face (se issue #50 and following) ).

I also have some designs of other spawns as well, unfortunately i only have one onto the comp. You may want him to use as another reference. Try to look for Daniel Llanso as well. Dont use the toys, they are kinda bad to me.
http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/medievalspawn_large.jpg

Sorry if this is much hassle, but you will have to pardon my obsession with this character.

seedra4
12-26-2002, 10:09 PM
Alevice.... man!!!... all I can say is that u r a hell of a Spawn freak!!! :buttrock:
Thanks for the jpgs; unfortunatly as u probably noticed, I'v been trying to imitate one of the Mcfarlane toys that I have at home, which is pretty much similer to the model... eaven the thin chains part... but as I sayed before, I cant make much changes at this stage.... but as a Spawn freak fellow, I promise u to make a completely diffrent Spawn proportion in the next new model....
:beer:

Alevice
12-26-2002, 10:17 PM
Alrighty, no problem. I hope the jpegs be useful.

JoBbE
12-26-2002, 11:14 PM
I don't like that boot thing.. seems a bit clumpsy.
but other than that, great model!

Johnlittle
12-27-2002, 12:19 AM
Nice work. Everyone has there own versions. This one is a bit smaller muscle wise,but still very good.:thumbsup:

nadeemmar
12-29-2002, 02:34 PM
انت من دمشق .............رائع ما بتعرف ادي انا مبسوط اني شوف شخص من بلدي بهالموهبة

موفق باذن الله

بس حابب تشوف هالتصميم عم اشتغل علي حاليا
http://www.threedy.com/showthread.php?s=&postid=25795#post25795

و السلام عليكم

lordmachuca
12-30-2002, 01:08 AM
did you use the action figure for the referance, i recoginze that boot thingy on his leg. his head looks a little funny it think. It might be bigger than it should be. also his neck looks to thick in that side view.

malkavian2003
12-30-2002, 01:24 AM
all in all i think you did a nice job. crits that i think you might be able to do to this model late in the game is bump up the texture. Red, Blue, Green. the desaturated blue green just doesnt do it.

i will go against the majority here and support the big monalithic (sp) boot. even a hellspawn needs a big bashing weapon.:wavey:

volk23
12-30-2002, 05:29 AM
Took a quick pic of the spawn that I have.

http://www.petstown.net/albums/misc/IMG_0701.thumb.jpg .


Large one (http://www.petstown.net/albums/misc/IMG_0701.jpg)

soulage
12-30-2002, 05:31 AM
:applause:
good!!

Xilica
12-30-2002, 05:31 AM
WOW :thumbsup:

lostworldenator
12-30-2002, 08:03 PM
nice job.:beer: :beer:

seedra4
12-31-2002, 04:14 AM
Thanks guys for your feedback...

volk23... u have the same toy that I have... even though mine is green and yours is red... did u spray it??? :D

nadeemmar... how r ya doing... and how is everything in Syria??
The model that u r working on is apselotely ammazing, I cant wait to c the animation, keep it goin man.... all the best

As for me guys, I didn't have much time to adjust on Spawn... just created couple of poses... hope u like it..
http://www.manar-tawam.com/misc/SpawnPoseFin.jpg

Alevice
12-31-2002, 04:16 AM
The glow should be greenish =P And i still think the pices of the 'armor' (the boot, the 'gloves, etc) should be dark red.

kassinopious
12-31-2002, 04:16 AM
cool model!!

i'm working on a model of medieval spawn atm, taking a long time, and could be 3-6 months before its recognisable as spawn yet (relative n00b to modelling you see).

but when theres something worth looking at ill post it :)

anyway GOOD JOB MAN!!!

Jenner
12-31-2002, 01:45 PM
Man thats an evil-looking thing! Extremely good modelling, but
sorry, I know its not nice of newbies to crit, but I see a seam going through the middle, from the head and all way down, is that supposed to be there?... It looks kind of ´cool on the head, but not so good on the neck and chest.. Anyway the whole
character is so super and nothing I could do in 100 years :scream: :surprised

kassinopious
12-31-2002, 02:29 PM
i see the seam on the head but nowhere else, and yes it is supposed to be there :)

//me a big big spawn fan! :D

seedra4
12-31-2002, 04:20 PM
Alevice... I thought that I was getting inventive with the character, but...damnn...it didn't work.. :rolleyes:

kassinopious... good luck with your model; try to post it in an early stage so everybody would have a look at it, can't wait to see it...

Jenner... just like kassinopious has sayed... the seam on the head is supposed to be there...

Here is a closeup for Spawn's face with the greenish majic on his eyes, and some filters to give him a bit of a commic style..
http://www.manar-tawam.com/misc/spawn_face.jpg

mfalcon
01-01-2003, 09:59 AM
hey man.....how did u do tht filter comic effect thing? its so cool man, ur spawn rocks...my main fuss would be the chain n kness i guess..........bigger massive chain for head bashin action, n beefier kness, cos he like jumps alot? still, cool stuff man, really rocks

Spliff_Richards
01-01-2003, 11:27 AM
Not that I could ever do such great work but here are my two cents. I think he needs to be dirtyer and he needs a bit more bulk. Me be hard this late in the game though. I´m a real comic book fan so I really love when talented people take time to make comic book characters in 3d. When is somebody gonna make a cool Spiderman?

Spliff_Richards
01-01-2003, 11:29 AM
...took a second look. This is super super work man, I love it.

The Magic Pen
01-01-2003, 07:54 PM
Awesome :buttrock:

Grooveholmes
01-01-2003, 10:35 PM
Oh yeah! That last render is fantastic, it looks like an actual action figure. I want to see thicker chains!

Ykay
01-01-2003, 11:41 PM
Very good job ! I like it !!! :thumbsup:

mash
01-02-2003, 01:19 AM
Marvellous Job, I think it should make it to the frontpage.

What do u think guys?!

:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:

:thumbsup:

Alevice
01-02-2003, 01:46 AM
Originally posted by seedra4
Alevice... I thought that I was getting inventive with the character, but...damnn...it didn't work.. :rolleyes:

Here is a closeup for Spawn's face with the greenish majic on his eyes, and some filters to give him a bit of a commic style..
http://www.manar-tawam.com/misc/spawn_face.jpg

As for the first, i am okay, if you respect the rules followed by all Spawns, as many i stated (sorry for mah Spawn adiction, i am not very tolerant in that field (which is bad), but heck.)

Nice update. What tool you use for the comic effect? Some sort of coolio rendering program?

seedra4
01-02-2003, 01:55 AM
Hi Guys...

Thanks again for the nice comments...

mfalcon... the effect I did is just a simple Adjusment of the Brightness and cotrast with an additie layering; I tryed not to make it complicated so I can execute the same effect in post for the animation...

Spliff_Richards... There is lots of changes needs to be done to the character to make it more Spawn looker like; hopefully I would find the time for it...

The Magic Pen; Grooveholmes; Ykay... Thanks alot guys...

mash... I tutaly agree whith the idea... :D



Here is another still... not much of a change; only abit on the color and the same type of filtering... since everybody liked it... :beer:
http://www.manar-tawam.com/misc/spawn_pose_fin2.jpg

seedra4
01-02-2003, 02:07 AM
Alevice... wow... we'r posting a reply at the same time.. :)
Hey...no worryes... I posted the thingy to recieve comments and feedback from people; the problem was that the toy that I copied the figuer from is a bit weak...
and believe me... from the photos that u should me earlier in the thread I know what is the next thing that I'm gonna model... which is this one
http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/medievalspawn_large.jpg

:thumbsup:

alaa ahmed
01-02-2003, 02:43 AM
السلام عليكم
فعلا اخي تعديلات جميله جدا
وتاثير الاضائه رائع جدا جدا ارجوا منك بعض التفصيل عن كيفيه عمله
وشكرا

Alevice
01-02-2003, 04:24 AM
Originally posted by seedra4
Alevice... wow... we'r posting a reply at the same time.. :)
Hey...no worryes... I posted the thingy to recieve comments and feedback from people; the problem was that the toy that I copied the figuer from is a bit weak...
and believe me... from the photos that u should me earlier in the thread I know what is the next thing that I'm gonna model... which is this one
http://alevice.xyweb.ca/html/medievalspawn_large.jpg

:thumbsup:

*big grin*

three
01-02-2003, 06:36 AM
Looking REALLY good now man :) The chains still need beafing up, and the redness need a more "dried blood"-red look. otherwise... congratulations, this is a hot-damn model :D

:xtreme:

Cgtalk
01-02-2003, 01:30 PM
gr8 work seedra4

keep going

i just wana say why we can't c the design in the first page of the forum like the another designes :annoyed:

Snakeman
01-02-2003, 08:45 PM
i love the traditional red looks good

Obaid3DFX
01-12-2003, 09:43 AM
Great job man....:beer:

very clean and nice look char.

I think this deserve 5 star or more...

اخي الكريم المنار اتمنى لكم التوفيق والنجاح وانه لشىء يفرحنى ان ارى شخص مثلكم ومن بلد عربي ان يمتلك مثل هذه القدرات الفنيه...بالتوفيق

Good Luck
:wip:

mikey111
01-12-2003, 02:41 PM
i like the spawn,

but the skin is awful~~~~~~~~~

:beer:

X-E-R-O-S
02-09-2003, 09:06 PM
I really like this character.
Good work. ':beer:'

sarfarazsoomro
02-09-2003, 09:39 PM
SUPERB !


:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

aenema
02-10-2003, 12:39 AM
hey man, kick ass model! ive browsed your site and i love your arnold also :) any insight insight as to the render, its very nice? seeing as its done with MR for Maya most likely, I can never achieve anything like that :)

pivot
02-10-2003, 09:30 AM
cool!!! great model :applause:

but I must agree with some of the others, the
boot thing looks really odd. And it seems that the
knee closest to the cam r shrinked... might be the angle though.

Keep it up!:cool:

Waters
02-10-2003, 05:34 PM
I see for the bump on spawn's skin it looks like your just using one of maya's standard 3d textures. It looks pretty cool how you made the bump on the skin sparatic, not uniform across the whole surface. But, I would suggest that you paint a bump map in photoshop, or any paint program, instead of using the 3d texture, the shading doesnt look on par with the modeling.

Great model though, I like it a lot. :applause:

yomope
02-10-2003, 06:54 PM
very good work i just dislike the bump... but its really great

gollums5
02-10-2003, 09:30 PM
2 spawns in the same forum'
holy shit!

hatsad
12-11-2003, 07:01 PM
good work

shyy
12-12-2003, 07:28 AM
SWEEET looking

DeadPoole
12-18-2003, 07:21 PM
Bigger chains for sure...bigger everything for that matter. Your guy looks a little scrawny but still a wonderful model.

nobrain
12-18-2003, 08:23 PM
I took the time to read 3 of the 5 pages and no one mentioned what I was looking for, so if its been pointed out excuse this post, I don't remember spawn having a club foot what is that about man.

otherwise good modelling texturing.

Hellwolve
12-18-2003, 10:47 PM
Originally posted by nobrain
I took the time to read 3 of the 5 pages and no one mentioned what I was looking for, so if its been pointed out excuse this post, I don't remember spawn having a club foot what is that about man.

otherwise good modelling texturing.

s funny...I rememer Spawn always having a 'club' foot...

http://www.mcfarlane.com/comics/SPAWN/monthly/images/spawn_comic_cover_130_cl.jpg

Just check these links for more 'proof':

http://www.mcfarlane.com/toys/spawn/series25/spawn95/images/series25_spawn95_photo_03_dp.jpg

http://www.mcfarlane.com/comics/SPAWN/monthly/images/spawn_comic_cover_131_cl.jpg

http://image.wisecart.co.kr/co_img6/yupgymall/medieval%20spawn%20iii.jpg

nobrain
12-18-2003, 10:58 PM
hellwolve -
I stand corrected (well partially), the club foot is there but the toe sticks out partially, in his spawn the club cover his entire foot and is substantially larger in proportion to the rest of his body. compare this to the reference pics you supplied and you might see where I was thrown off.

dur23
12-18-2003, 11:36 PM
WTF this thread started like a frigin year ago....why would you seriously dig this up.....too much crack=bad

marcolino18
12-19-2003, 04:22 AM
very nice... :bounce:

Hellwolve
12-19-2003, 01:04 PM
Originally posted by nobrain
hellwolve -
I stand corrected (well partially), the club foot is there but the toe sticks out partially, in his spawn the club cover his entire foot and is substantially larger in proportion to the rest of his body. compare this to the reference pics you supplied and you might see where I was thrown off.

I stand corrected as well: we're both right :beer:

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