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DJ Bindhi

12-24-2002, 08:21 PM

Just something I started sketching earlier this week. I'm not sure where I'm going with it and there's much tweeking left before any part of her body can be considered complete. But, as always, crit away and drop any suggestions you wanna part with.

MukMan

12-24-2002, 08:38 PM

She looks as if she has a crease down her face... The black makes it hard to see a whole lot of the body's detail.

MrPunkin

12-25-2002, 04:27 AM

in my opinion the face looks very masculine.

WinterEC

12-26-2002, 12:12 AM

I agree, the face looks very masculine.

Something about the eyes and cheekbone structure is doing that, I think, in addition to the chin. Also, if you look, it's almost like "she" has an Adam's Apple (which is a definite no-no for fem's). :shame:

I also think maybe for these WIP posts you might want to consider a grey-tone or some other color for the jumpsuit.

Great start, though.

Keep working!

WinterEC

Ogi

01-13-2003, 07:57 AM

Nice work man. keep it up
Like your modelling. :) :)

Alltough.. Try to have the eyes more in the center, if you know
what i mean.. more close to the nose.! :)

Good work so far.. :thumbsup:

PaulCarry

01-13-2003, 12:28 PM

The base of the nose looks a little strange, and the mouth looks awkward, i'd also say the eyelids need to be a little larger. But overall at this stage its coming along well! :thumbsup:

DJ Bindhi

01-28-2003, 09:40 PM

Makin Progress, thx for the comments and suggestions so far.

DJ Bindhi

01-29-2003, 05:03 PM

Hey all, any comments would be nice. If it suks please let me know, as I will start again. Love the harsh crits too, bring em on. Thx, the Mgmt.

DJ Bindhi

01-31-2003, 11:00 PM

update

DJ Bindhi

01-31-2003, 11:03 PM

closeup

olga8515

02-01-2003, 12:23 PM

the suit is ok, although it still looks a bit strange to me, BUT her chest and shoulders are definitely too narrow, and something's wrong about her hips, belly and crotch area...could you post a front and left view? Her hair just won't do...but honestly she looks pretty impressive so far anyway

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