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SupRore
03-26-2006, 05:33 PM
I don't know very much about highpoly, and have been using this model (for far too long) to experiment with it. I figured, though, that I should go ahead and put it out for critique.


3dsmax 8, one subdivison level:
http://i1.tinypic.com/sc5l50.jpg
http://i1.tinypic.com/sc4yhf.jpg


Unsmoothed:
http://tinypic.com/sc4cx0.jpg
hoodedpython
03-26-2006, 05:36 PM
Wow, that looks really good, great work no crits from me.
Eightball
03-26-2006, 08:03 PM
looks nice so far! The six-pack is great!

Could you please post a wire of the unsmoothed version? I'm looking forward to model a pretty muscular man in a while, too, so i could use some references ;)

Thx a lot!
Alex
SupRore
03-26-2006, 10:07 PM
looks nice so far! The six-pack is great!

Could you please post a wire of the unsmoothed version? I'm looking forward to model a pretty muscular man in a while, too, so i could use some references ;)

Thx a lot!
Alex

Sure, here (http://i1.tinypic.com/scqhqx.jpg).


But my model's probably not good for reference; I only barely know what I'm doing.
pap87
03-27-2006, 12:11 PM
Very good work. Perhaps the only thing i could pick on is the area where the bottom of the chest connects to the shoulder. It should flow straight into it, in a straight line basically. I hope that helps because you already have a great model.
SupRore
03-28-2006, 05:54 AM
Thank you for your critique.

Anyone else have comments?
VanDerGoes
03-28-2006, 07:55 AM
It's surely a great start.
Pay attention to the pectoral: it should end up where the deltoid begins. In your model it seems to go under it instead.
Keep it up!!
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