character: girl - urgent crit needed on eyes

[quinox]

nice :D

1) there is a line in the middle of the face ^_^
2) its not a hyper-realistic looking head, but if you were going for a really-good-looking-head (-12:19- <MrMark> good looking) then you did a great job!
3) for a more anime-look, decrease the lips (there are too thick now) and nouse, and add anime-stile-strait/spike hair ^_^

[Dr BeN]

hmmm good start but i have some slight prob's to get the femenin marks out of this face it looks very ... erm large ... few women have such strong faces ... except boxers ;)

[mrmark]

hehe cg freak, i suck at modelling females, that is like my first attempt at one

i removed the piccy for u
any ideas where i can find some good resources/tips/guidelines for modelling females, not elephant ppl???

any help is obviously much abliged!!

[vorlon]

Yo mrmark, now I have no idea what you did, because the pic is no longer in this thread.

I myself am modeling a female's head, and I know how hard it is in comparison to making a male head. We all struggle making a female head.

Don't stop showing your work just because someone here gives you a rude attitude. I love how some people attack others with the pre-phrased with "No offense, but...". It's as if after he used "No Offense", he can say anything he wants, and you're not supposed to take it as an insult. I supposed he was trying to make you feel better with that, and you appreciate that a lot!

This forum is called WIP, for newbie to experienced users. The worst you can do is not asking for comment on your work, and therefore improve. We are all newbie at one point or another.
I hope this won't stop making you post work from now on just because of some jerks lurking around here.

Here is a link that should help you:

http://www.fineart.sk/

[mrmark]

hey thanks vorlon, but i dont plan on leaving (sorry cgfreak) ive been here for ages and i am very fond of this community, everyone gets along great and everyone is informative and helpful
thank you very much for ure understanding in this matter, do u have msn messenger??

here is what i got rid of followed by some of my other artworks:

http://members.lycos.co.uk/digibola/girlgerms2.jpg

and some others:



http://members.lycos.co.uk/digibola/allegiance2.jpg

http://members.lycos.co.uk/digibola/avatar.jpg

http://members.lycos.co.uk/digibola/smug.jpg

not trying to sound big headed, but i dont consider myself as a newbie, i feel im somewhere in the middle lol, nowhere near anders or gabe or pascal (to name a few cg gods) but i feel like my skills havce come a fair way since i started.

thank you once again vorlon, im glad there are ppl like you 'lurking' around here hehe

cya later

[roarty]

CgFreak

what a stupid comment. Try to be of some help or be quiet. :thumbsdow

mrmark

Its coming along. I really like your other pics as well. nice style. try to take a look at some tapology tutorials.

[mrmark]

hey thanks roarty

i think it would be a good idea to look for somethign like that

so i will :)

cheers

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