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ntmonkey

12-21-2002, 04:02 AM

Hey Talkies,

This is my first scene using shaders and lighting in Maya. It was a project for school but I felt that it needed to be worked more. This is something that I would like to improve for a demo reel down the line, so I'd like to see if I could get some crits to make it better.

Thanks,

Lu

Hopefully this fixed the problem of it not pulling up correctly.

Table Scene (http://www.visualeruptions.com/TableScene.html)

g3n

12-21-2002, 04:40 AM

would be great if the image worked :thumbsup: :)

Hates_

12-21-2002, 11:52 AM

Can't see it, but I guess it must look good :p

ntmonkey

12-21-2002, 12:22 PM

Here is an image for those not able to see. I can't seem to understand the problem other than maybe a browser issue. I've even called a few of my peers to see if the link works and it does. But, here it is. Sorry about the inconvience.

Thanks,

Lu

Hates_

12-21-2002, 12:44 PM

Oops my bad I missed the link at the bottom of your posting! :)

Looks good. Could possibly tweak the lights so that the candles create shadows etc?

Microbe

12-21-2002, 06:04 PM

your img src tag is wrong in your web page, that's why the image is not loading.
you can view the full size pic here: http://www.visualeruptions.com/images/tablescene.jpg
(to fix your web page the path should be src="images/tablescene.jpg" in your TableScene.html file...)

Looks pretty good! :thumbsup: I'm just starting on Maya too. If I have one crit I'd say the champagne glasses are a bit too thick on top (or maybe the top is too rounded?)

ntmonkey

12-23-2002, 04:22 AM

Thanks for the crits. I'm on the task on making the glass right on top, and I'm trying to add lights to cast shadows. Would you think a rose or something would go good with the composition?? It would add a bit more romance and soften up the image a bit. Anyway, back to work. Thanks again.

Lu

Trion-5

12-23-2002, 05:14 AM

leave a crayola by his/her name, seeing that's what he/she wrote the note with. Lol

g3n

12-23-2002, 09:39 AM

ok now i see the pic :) looks good but you might make the bottom of the glases on the left a little bit larger... it seems abit unstable at the moment.

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