CGTalk - Vehicle: Ship WIP

Project813

12-20-2002, 12:33 PM

http://www.richardfournier.com/maya/shiptest.htm

Just a few screencaps of my model. Any feedback would be great.

Thanks!

Project813

12-21-2002, 05:20 AM

wow no one...

:annoyed:

Bane

12-21-2002, 05:29 AM

Well you didnt realy tell us much about it, so we cant tell you how to make it more like what you didnt tell us about...?_?

Anyways, it looks like a good start, I always love those jet blades/grill things.

TemperalVision

12-21-2002, 05:31 AM

One thing I might fix is the connection between the ship and the jets. The jets look big and heavy so it looks like there right about to break off. There needs to be more support for them.:)

X.S.N.R.G

12-21-2002, 07:44 AM

I like the details underneath, those always bring out a models look.

i dont know about anyone else but I find it so hard to make a ship that dosn't look like *somthing* out of star wars or star trek :p ,

Project813

12-21-2002, 12:53 PM

yeah thats very true, it kinda ended up looking like a cross between a Y Wing and Lukes land speeder.

True about not explaining it well enough, this is just something I was trying out. Its my first model that not a tutorial and I wanted to see what I could do with it...

Good point about the wings looking like they might not be able to support the engines. (this is the type of comment I needed) I kinda like the exagerated look to it, but im going to try to beef it up a little.....

thanks for the comments!

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