Dark-Angel (first-wip)

[Max4ever]

that's very good! i like the ideea most...
there is something about the wings that i don't like...i dunno what...but in rest is way cool...aaah and the cloth is very strange on the knee,is too smoth..that's all for now...waiting for some updates ;)

[aurora]

The one thing I can see on the wings is that the bottom portions are concave down instead of what I'm used to seeing in bats, dragons and so forth where thet are convex up. Not that I'm saying this is wrong, just different then what we are used to seeing. On a whole I love the entire concept but am wondering how much better this guy would looked fully textured?

[NelsonInomvan]

Hmm not bad but there is much work to do, so go and work

BTW HellRender i see you got a big fan :p

[The-Buzz]

Thank for all comments :)

max4ever: i think the wings are too thick but when I would put a texture, they won't be like that anymore ;)
and for the knee, I'm working on...

Hellrender: yes I've been inspired by tyrael :rolleyes:

aurora: the wings are concave down because they are made in middle-age cloth...

Atmos-fear: I'm work... I'm work... :D

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[Hates_]

Wow really nice!

Do you have any other views? Or a wire we can see? :surprised

[Travis]

how's he gonna fly with all those cables holdig him down?

Seriously, though, nice work. i like the concept

[The-Buzz]

On zoom in :bounce:

http://creabuzz.free.fr/img/3d/wip/beta-da-16



Travis: no , those cables serve to power up(or reload energy) the robot and analyze robot system and mechanics... :rolleyes:


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[The-Buzz]

I modified the cloth of the knee, but I think is not enough correct...:hmm:

http://creabuzz.free.fr/img/3d/wip/beta-da-23

[TES]

good work,but what about to give more details in his boots? and wings looks like ....i don´t know how ,but it don´t look mechanical or something like this......sory for english:hmm:

[TES]

and what about to give him a bit more clothes over his shoulder? just only try it.........I think,that it would look good ....just only my opinion

[Indigo]

Loox like some religious superhero psycho renegade dude...

very nice....

but needs more work, like the hands need to be a bit bigger,
and wings need more attention... make them mechanical so that they could deploy or something...

[The-Buzz]

Yes, I want to put more details on the boots...

More clothes over his shoulder? I don't see where I could put that... :rolleyes:

Thank for comments ;)

The|Buzz

[Lukashi]

i dig it cloth on wings cold be more evil though :) or maybe angel wings
iono they need change but it rox either way keep going!

[Hysteria]

That is so awesome! :scream: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :D But you should make the wings more evil like tyreal in D2

[ntmonkey]

The Buzz,

I think I can help you out with the wings if you ever decide to change it. You could make it scaled, but in a mechanical way. That would go well with the rest of the mecha look. Not little bitty scales, but some large panel that will slide between each other. I think that would be cool.

Good Luck,

Lu

[g3n]

wow, great stuff, keep us updated m8.

[RadiantWings]

I think the reason the wings are so "blah" compared to the rest of the image, is that they lack a dynamic. The rest of him is very detailed, but they are super simple, If you are going to keep them fabric, make them like made out of mylar or something that wrinkles up, or give more supports that run through the middle of the wing, or add tears that show a more detailed matrix running underneath of the surface. something to liven it up. The other thing is that the actual model is very sinister, where as the wings seam almost cuddly

[The-Buzz]

Thanks for all comments ;)

I'm decided to modify the wings, your posts encouraged me to change that :rolleyes:

I will work on it, in the next few days :bounce:

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