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Hyptosis
03-17-2006, 02:19 AM
http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/c01p011.jpg

http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/c01p012.jpg

These are two more pages I did for my comic. I'm trying desperatly to get better at them, thanks for looking guys, any advice would be awesome. Thanks.

SylvanMist
03-17-2006, 07:38 PM
Wow, looks really great imo! The only thing I noticed that I thought I'd mention is that in most of the frames where the guys are talking their lips are closed, it might look better if they were open, shown as "talking", instead.

RobertoOrtiz
03-17-2006, 10:21 PM
Cool comic,
Would you be interested in posting with us?

Click link:
THE COMIC PAGES: (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=322995)

-R

Hyptosis
03-17-2006, 11:05 PM
Thanks guys. I've made a few changes based on what people have said and such. As for posting it, I'm not sure how much more I will be doing at this point and don't want to make any hollow promises. Thanks though, and I did post Rum's Tale there but since it is finished I'm not sure it was much help for your cause. =\ I'll for sure be doing a web comic in the future and would love to post with you guys. =]

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