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Screenblind
03-16-2006, 03:43 PM
This is still at a very rough stage but, with your help, I hope to refine it into a beautiful 8-pager! Please give as much criticism as you can manage - it will all be appreciated.

The King of Denmark, after a failed attempt to hold his homeland against Frisian aggression, finds himself swiftly drawn from the field of battle by the victorious veterans while all about him are slaughtered. .....http://benovision.co.uk/CGS/SOA_pg01_rough01.jpg

arnocob
03-16-2006, 04:51 PM
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Hi!
Maybe you could explain to us a little bit your story development.
The caracters seems good, and the rythm in the page too, I think you should post another page...
It seems like a good beginning
bye

Maybe could you host your images on a free server, it 'll allows us to see them easily
here a link to explain process if you don't know it.
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Screenblind
03-16-2006, 06:39 PM
arnocob: merci beaucoup ami/e. enchanté.

Heres page two. The Danish King pontificates on his Son's folly as he prepares to lose his head. On a not-too-distance ridge, The King of Frisia; Allover draws near, and aspies what his victorious troops are plotting...



http://benovision.co.uk/CGS/SOA_pg02_rough01.jpg

Screenblind
03-16-2006, 06:39 PM
Page 3... oh yes... indeed. I hope this one says it all... its my favourite of the first five. Response particularly welcome as to the success of the perspective...




http://benovision.co.uk/CGS/SOA_pg03_rough01.jpg

Screenblind
03-16-2006, 06:43 PM
Page Four - The Shores of Avalon. The King Of Denmark dares to hope his prayers may have been answered....


http://benovision.co.uk/CGS/SOA_pg04_rough01.jpg

Screenblind
03-16-2006, 06:51 PM
Page 5 - rough rough rough rough rough.

The Frisian King makes himself known and ascertains the situation...quickly moving to calm his warriors and to berate the executioner for his lack of respect.

http://benovision.co.uk/CGS/SOA_pg05_rough01.jpg

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