The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: caner yildiz

[neverfailedtofail]

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[neverfailedtofail]

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[neverfailedtofail]

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[individium]

keep it coming
it look very different than all others but not much understandable yet, is there an explosion
in the middle?

başarılar ;)

[neverfailedtofail]

There would be a gate or something like that in the middle. i hope..
thanks...

[neverfailedtofail]

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[neverfailedtofail]

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i hope i can finish in time

[BlackDidThis]

Even if you can't finish in time;
I have to congratulate you for at least trying to ACTUALLY paint the characters unlike a few that prefer to take pictures of a good set of people, run it through a gallery filter and tell us that they actually "Quick-sketched" them with amazing lighting/volume.
I'm not sure of the building you included on the right side of the painted image to compare to the sketch actually... but I guess you wanted to increase some pressure.

I think in the last image you have managed to capture the pressure of how you can actually feel a crowd literally "choke" you as they come towards you.
It may be a good idea not to loose this.

Instead of making an obvious gate, have you also considered to just complete the image and then literally 'rip' into it? Or to pinch the image right there into a sort of tunnel?


Well just a variety of thoughts... You seem to have a LOT of work to do with the manner you are going to fill the canvas in. I wish you the best of luck and hope you can finish it as you wish to... in time that is.


Black

[slickgreekgeo]

The composition is impressive, try to push your values more, as everything appears to be more flat (you're probably planning to do this, just wanted to point it out in case :)

Very promising work, looking forward to updates.

[anticz]

Hi neverfailedtofail,
Your perspective is working well. Now all you need to do is add a Starbucks sign with a big line outside and.... Sorry couldn't resist. Seriously though, good prspective, now you need to start tightening everything up and pay attention to tonal value to add some depth..

[neverfailedtofail]

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there is still a lot to do.. i will add some lights and shadows and also details of buildings..

[neverfailedtofail]

black, thanks for your words.. yes i changed building on the right side for a tighter atmosphere and yes crowd feel is the main point.. i thought a obvious gate but pinching the image is good idea i will try that.

anticz and slick, you are right i have to work on values and depth..

thanks for the comments..

[individium]

very nice colors there

why other people act like they dont recognize the gate. it very metaphorical right now and looking good but i am curious about your story

[neverfailedtofail]

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[cgoz]

hi bro,
damn that school! wish you could've complete...
görüşürüz

[neverfailedtofail]

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iadded noise and lights.. i will add some details today if i have time..

[individium]

hi caner,

yeah me too, but today is the last day and mine needs too much work but yours is near to end.

i liked the last post very much, it has an oilpaint feeling, last effects and details are very good.

başarılar.

[neverfailedtofail]

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This is the final image, best wishes for the challenge.. I was very glad to take part in a contest.

cheers..

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