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Wardo
03-14-2006, 04:58 PM
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/5784/killing3mm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Hello, here is something i did on painter, I need advice on how I can improve it. Please give your opinions.
Thank you

Wardo

JTD
03-14-2006, 05:16 PM
It's hard to look at something 1900 x 2800 pixels so start by showing us a smaller version. Aside from form issues (see the hands) I think that the killee should not be looking at the viewer. I think that breaks the moment and makes the viewer look at the technique instead of the moment depicted in the scene.

So to review

1) smaller for website viewing
2) forms (unless you want something stylistic)
3) no portraits, no looking at the viewer.

Other than that it's a lovely picture.

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