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kikhu
03-14-2006, 04:32 PM
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Title: Stealth Exposure
Name: Luigi Giampaolo
Country: Italy
Software: Photoshop

hi!!that's the third time that i'm posting an image. so...i would like your comments about it...
that's an experimental work for me using strong lights/shadows contrast and open, more relaxed prospective...
hope you like it...
serio
03-14-2006, 06:20 PM
I like it! Colors are juicy and objects are nicely done..Only shape of the objects are little bit too oval I think..
JTD
03-14-2006, 06:26 PM
"strong lights/shadows contrast and open, more relaxed prospective" - Yes, you've achived what you wanted. This looks great and I love the design of the stealth!
harryb
03-14-2006, 06:35 PM
Hi Luigi,

Your overall concept is really good. I like the strong light and the design of the plane. This image shows a lot of promise.

That said, the surfaces look fairly flat. There's no caustic or ambient reflection which you'd expect to see on shiny srufaces and on such a bright day. All the surfaces look like the same material.

While I really like the design of the plane, the trucks look a bit like toys. Maybe you could add some details like mirrors, hand rails, surface breaks? Maybe adjust the wheelbase?

Keep at it! It's like you're 85% there. . . . just a few more details and a little work on the materials and this will be fantastic!
waheednasir
03-14-2006, 07:11 PM
good, sweet work...:).
kikhu
03-15-2006, 08:45 AM
hi!!!thanks to everyone...
your critique will be very usefull.....
and now i'm going to retouch my work!
DarkSkills
03-15-2006, 12:48 PM
I love the colors!
Badsight
03-16-2006, 03:54 AM
hello kikhu , i like your lighting of the back wheel

prehaps the ground is on too much of an angle ?

but otherwise , thx for sharing
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