The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: Federico Moreno Breser

[jackmcfly]

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greetings!! this is a few concepts that i am working on, trying to get a clear idea for mi 2D work...
any comments are more than welcome
Jackmcfly

[BrianC]

nice character and concepts!
good luck!

[walrus]

Cute character design... He really comes to life in the color version. If I make it out correctly, he's a apratrooper about to make the big jump? I like the fact that in the lower-left sketch, he's got a lot of expression to his face. It will be easier to convey his emotions if we could also see his eyes. Have you considerred taking the glasses off? Or making them more see-through? Or giving him larger goggles that we could see more of his eyes through? Might help the character read better... Anyhow, good luck with it!

-mike

[anzibon]

nice character.

what happens when the chute opens? does it come out of the shell? it looks like the straps go under the shell. could be a good shtick!

best of luck and giranamo!!!
~B

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