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Hyptosis
03-12-2006, 11:51 PM
http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/sitting3.jpg

Don't worry about offending or anything, just help me out with it. I think her head might be too big so I'm going to go mess with that, but any suggestions will be very much appreciated. Thanks guys. Anything at all will help, thanks.

http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/sitting4.jpg

Hyptosis
03-13-2006, 02:25 AM
I made some repairs based on stuff friends and conceptart.org had to say. Thanks for looking.

http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/sitting5.jpg

http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/sitting6.jpg

http://www.lorestrome.com/trash/sitting7.jpg

Overchord
03-13-2006, 08:28 AM
Impressive detail in the foreground! Are you going to go through the entire image and add that level of detail? The two things that need some attention mostly right now (IMO) is the tree on the right amd the bish on the left.

Great work :thumbsup: Look forward to see the progress!

jmBoekestein
03-13-2006, 06:12 PM
It looks vrey nice overall, but I think what's lacking is a strong directional lightsource, like the sun or even the sun scattered by atmospheric build up. I can't see any cast shadows which makes it apear kinf of flattish. Just my 2 cents :). Good luck.

aldog
03-13-2006, 06:19 PM
Wow that looks great, I love the colors.
The perspective on the music box looks a little odd, and the stone that it's sitting on as well, it looks like they're both on quite a bit of a slant in an unnatural sort of way, and because of that it led my eyes to the girls bottom, it also seems a bit to low in comparison to where her feet are placed.
I'm not sure about the size of the head, I only really thought about it after you said that. And the tattoo looks great, but you should make it wrap around her arm a bit more, your only showing her arm from the side and generally a tattoo would run a little more like 3/4th's of the way around the arm, so maybe make some of those curlies dip back out of site a little.

Hyptosis
03-14-2006, 01:45 AM
Awesome guys, I'll have an update soon. Thanks a million, I'll try to fix it up. Although the grave will be really difficult to deal with =\ Might have to leave that little bit. I tried to make suttle things in the images lead the eye to her, not really her butt =] Thanks again guys.

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