flewp
12-17-2002, 10:41 AM
http://ck.ethereal.net/kitchen10.jpg
Okay all, I really need some critiques on this scene.
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Some notes about it:
the pawn on the ground won't be there (probably a different pose, maybe chasing the knight piece around)
Garbage can needs a bag and some garbage in it, but I'm not sure that can save it in terms of composition.
The empty stool will probably have a king piece sitting on it, with glasses and a necktie on, reading a paper.
Probably use some subtle DOF eventually too.
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(I apologize if this was posted here before, as I have posted it to other forums, but I don't remember submitting it here. I searched and searched, and I didn't find it anywhere here, so here it is. )
Okay all, I really need some critiques on this scene.
--------------------------------------
Some notes about it:
the pawn on the ground won't be there (probably a different pose, maybe chasing the knight piece around)
Garbage can needs a bag and some garbage in it, but I'm not sure that can save it in terms of composition.
The empty stool will probably have a king piece sitting on it, with glasses and a necktie on, reading a paper.
Probably use some subtle DOF eventually too.
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(I apologize if this was posted here before, as I have posted it to other forums, but I don't remember submitting it here. I searched and searched, and I didn't find it anywhere here, so here it is. )