The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: Sinad Jaruatjanapat

[SINAD]

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Hi all, This my first time for join the cgtalk challenge.

This my 1st sketch. for this concept.

My idea for this challenge came from dream when I was young I always think that every times I opened the book myself has begun to journey in it story. Especially for the Fairy tales. Then I realize that I got a topic that is every times I open a book my journey has begins but this time not just me that journey but I will take everyone join it too .

Ah ... There's one thing that I want to tell you guys for the first time my girlfriend want to join this challenge too, but we're accidentally have a same idea for challenge. Then she decide to that she'll let me go on in this challenge and she'll be behind and gave me a push up for this.

So I won't let her down on my work for sure.

[MichaelZHsee]

looking good sinad,i kinda like this idea~:)
its great to have u here,all the best and good luck

[SINAD]

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Hi all, this one is my 2nd sketch.I made this more match for the challenge topic the first one it not look like jouney begin. It look like some strange things in libraly haha.

[Ramitxon]

Wow, fantastic concept and sketch. I see you will put things tough for the rest of us. I' m impatient to see more. Good luck.

[Ramitxon]

Oops! I haven't seen the second concept, it is awesome too, maybe you are right and this one is better suited for the rules of the contest but I prefer the first one, I think it has some kinfd of magic.

[MichaelZHsee]

ohh~another one~this concept suits better to the theme indeed.kinda rpg game poster~keep it coming man:thumbsup:

[LorisArts]

WOW!! thats a great sketch!! Amazing. Great concept!! Subscribed ;) Keep up and good luck!

[Nigio]

Nice and promising concepts! The second one looks like a final artwork. Keep it going.

[grobouk]

very nice idea, good continuation

[MichaelCTY]

wow bro , sorry I am late wow these 2 sketch r just awesome,the 2nd one is my fav,lost of fantasy BG and great compo,I can see the story of a Journey ,really nice. i love it
keep it up man:)

[monsitj]

wow! nice to see you joined! note! your final will be awesome for sure! and hey , let your girlfriend to join too! if concept is the same but I think the final output will be different ! the important thing is to have fun !
and where is fiduciose? hehehe:eek:

[nebezial]

so unbeleavably cute and awesome at the same time lovin this one:applause:

[LorisArts]

hmm.. looking at it again I have a small suggestion SINAD. I was also wondering how it may look like if in the foreground there was no hand of the "viewer" but maybe trying without it and have the girl having her hand open and looking at the viewer. so that she will be inviding us to this journey. Just a thought!! :D

[ThalitaDol]

I really really loved this sketch of yours!!!
The colors are so full of light! So pretty...
Congratulations!

[Xillion]

Very good entry! It's a shame there are so few comments! I'm waiting to see how it develops. ;)

[JTD]

I like how you're pulling the viewer in...literally. Neat world too.

[SINAD]

thank you every body for viewing :)

monsitj : thank p' she said that she will think 'bout that again.
Michael Chang : thank to you buddy!!
sh@ke : thank you
Ramitxon : thank you
Loris_ : thank you for comment I will thing over about it again.
Nigio : really :) final image there still far to go. thank ya
grobouk : thank ya!!
nebezial : i so glad that you like it. thank!!
ThalitaDolial :thank you
Xillion : don't be sgame for short comment. coz my comment shortter
than you!! thank

[SINAD]

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1st detail : A main idea for this work I want to make viewer can come into the land of imaginary. So I want to use this 2 children come to invite to visit this world with them.

[SINAD]

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2nd detail : Background detail at the right of 2nd sketch.

I've bring some important scene from well know fairy tales.

Ex. Snowwhite , Rapunsel , Little Red Ridinghood , Alice in Wonderland etc.

[SINAD]

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3rd detail : The detail from left of 2nd sketch.

[walrus]

Wow! I hadn't seen your other sketches before, so this just totally took me by surprise. This is great! Really great!

The only usggestions I have would be about some of the critters around the 2 main characters: The placement of the rabbit is a little awkward. What if you moved it so there was more space around the girl's head? Right now it's just a little cramped... or maybe she actually does have a rabbit growing out of her hair..?

Also, The dog on the right isn't doing much of anything right now... Have you considered turning him to face the viewer as well?

Lastly, the tower in the second detail is tilded slightly to the left but the ground is tilted a lot to the right and there's a mismatch. Perhaps leaning it to the right will not only make it match the ground plane it's sitting on, but also form a compositional "radius" pointing back at the focus of the picture in the lower center.

Anyhow, can't wait to see how this one comes out. Great work so far!

-mike

[Vahn]

very cool sketches ... i like the ff style :thumbsup:

also the idea with taking the viewers hand works very well in there ... good job..keep em coming :D :applause:

[W-I-L]

wow.. you got skills. love your style so much... just brilliant. like idea too. and your compositions and skill with colour really amke it work... no crits from me.. i not worthy:applause:

[Feimi]

Excellent work so far! I'm sure the final image will be great!

[MVDB]

There's something about your style in that concept sketch of yours that keeps me coming back again and again, dunno what it is.... Guess this style it's just plain good :thumbsup:

[emrahelmasli]

Oh, holly hell. Very nice stuff! Good luck dude

[beelow]

Hey, sup Sinad! Glad to see u here in this contest! Really nice sketches that u have here, I'll be watching, from the states to see how this will develop! :thumbsup:

Where's Fid? Tell him to enter the bastard!!!:argh: :p :D

[Zycho]

As the walrus said, this also took me totally by suprise! Very very nice work!! Keep it up man!:thumbsup:

[dash2k4]

Love the colors! I'm a little bit confused as to the direction of the journey. It looks like the character will come towards the viewer, but there's not enough to indicate there's anything but a nice, flat path. I'm sure you're working on the rest of the picture and all issues will be addressed as you see fit. I look forward to this one!

[xric7]

The placement of the rabbit is a little awkward. What if you moved it so there was more space around the girl's head? Right now it's just a little cramped... or maybe she actually does have a rabbit growing out of her hair..?

hey note,nice to see you :twisted: finally u entered.ur entry is really nice done so far.i love or concept and style.i'll look forward for urs.good luck.:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[Wayne jermaine]

very nice concept dude... keep it going

[tuck]

Sawasdee krub!
thanks for visit my entry!

This is an impressive image,the composition is very interesting .:thumbsup:

[SINAD]

Thank you very for everyone to visit me here :)

walrus : Thank you for comment a lot :) . I think i'll do 3rd sketch for ather concept this just
my 2nd sketch . please wait to see. But if i used this sketch your comment is look
cool for me.

Vahn : Thanks a lot for your word:)

W!L : man you make me shy :blush: thanks to you too

Feimi : Still far to complete, but i will try to go there

MichaelMotion : thank you very much. That's !! what i want everyone to feel like that ;)

Atmospheria : Hey! guy thx for that .

beelow : thx to you buddy for reply me here:beer:

Zycho : wonder why everyone think the same with walrus ??? :banghead: - [ Guess his idea are
right though ] - thanks to you too :)


dash2k4 : I agree with your comment about that. Thank for telling that point.


xric7 : another one ............... :banghead: , guess i had to do follow by that.......
and thanks to you P'kun :beer:.

Wayne jermaine : Got that dude.

tuck : Korpkun krub. please come to visit me again here & I'll looking forword to you too.

[juniorlucky]

Hi my friend,nice to see you joined. Fantastic concept and sketch.I like it.I wait to see ur update na ja.Good luck CG challenges:thumbsup:

[MikeTheHunter]

Hello, Sinad. Firstly - great concepts! Really nice idea that is put onto paper with a good style.

But as Mike ( walrus ) said - you could consider some composal changes to the image. What I think you should do as well is make a guidelines for vertical lines all over the image, cause the second, third and fourth castles in the background interfere with the vertical lines that are put in the plane in front of them - the waterfalls and the rocky valley. If the second one is hanging, it still would remain vertical position. But other than that - it's a really great sketch.

Man... can't wait how the third will look like :thumbsup:

[umbrellasky]

Oooo wow!! I adore your sketches, wonderful! Great idea too. :applause:

[erilaz]

Brilliant stuff1 Such wonderful detail and dedication to the topic. I love the fact that you are taking your time to flesh out ideas. It will be worth it, i'm sure!

[SINAD]

Hi thanks for all your C&C a lot

juniorlucky : Thank you very much for your word . :)

MikeTheHunter : I'm very apriciate in your suggestion. It gave me a well know for artwork a
lot. ( oh! also walrus too ) :)

enialadam : Your word made me shy agian you know!!! :blush:

erilaz : I glad that it worth for everyone to see it :)

[Neozoom]

really really a Very good idea!
can't wait to see more!

love the composition , the universe, the style and angle of view of this pic :)
do as this way.

see ya , I'll come back see next.

[Alouette]

great one!
i love your draws.

good luck and have fun!

[SINAD]

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This sketch I've try to change the way to express my idea. The style have change but the concept still the same that everytime when we're open a books we'll journey in the world of those books.

For this one that I've change the style 'cause the 2nd sketch it just show the landscape of fairy tales world,but it doesn't show an important scenes from those story. So for this 3rd sketch I want to show important scenes that everyone who see this pic can reconize that which story it cames from. And the scene that I've chose it's the scene that I want it to retold that the journey has begins.

CLICK here for large image (http://members.thai.net/wizardghost/journy-begin-skeatch-3-big.jpg)

[paperclip]

Great style you have there. I'd pick the first one though, it seems much more human and interesting, although I like the 2nd one also.

[Dominus]

i like your concept with all those storyes, very interesting. just find the right colors now :)

[beelow]

I agree with Theresa, go for the first, the second one is cool too!:thumbsup:

[CodeNothing]

I love the 1st sketch and the last one. The first does seem to be more 'personal' with the characters, but the last sketch is just such an amazing ride. Great composition.

[Ponlawut]

wow...Graet composition and style,i like the 3 rd sketch ....CHEER !

[MichaelCTY]

wow,bro love ur new sketch, love the feeling alot, and those characters, but i still love the 2nd one,really like that alot haha

[ymonkato]

WOW! That is simply awesome! Man, I like it! Sooo many wonderful details and a ton of great characters in action. Really good job! I'll be back to visit ya.

[NinjaA55N]

very nice concept! I'm sure I'll be looking at this thread more often :) keep up the good work!

[cabotinecco]

Want to see more!!!:>
Lucky!:thumbsup:

[SINAD]

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These 2 character that I'll use for real work. The story behind these character is they're got into the world of fairies tales and traveling from story to another story. While they're traveling in Fairies tales world they got a friends from those story too. It just look alike an RPG game.

Explanation for these character :
For the boy I use his costume like he wear form the world that he came from, but he had some equipment that he get from his journey too.

And for the girl in her hand will hold a megicalbook that is the gate that bring them here.

And for the megicalbook ...........
(to tell the truth that I got no idea bout it for now ....... TT_TT )

[walrus]

Wow, it's like Jack and Jill (or Hansel and Gretel) if there were a Final Fantasy game made about them!
Looks good... but which overall layout are you using? I hope you use #2, the big landscape one. I feel that one held together more as a single piece and fit the theme more too.

-mike

[SINAD]

Hi walrus thank you for your reply:).

Yes I'll use the background from 2nd sketch. 'Cause it image is match for the Megical Fairies tales world alot. :)

[beelow]

Nice character concepts dude, I'll be waiting for what u do next dude, keep it up!:thumbsup:

[i-popba]

Wow..!! Thai guy!! Sood yod krub..!! Nice concept...you rock.!

[xitemx]

Hi
very nice Characters.:)

[Ramitxon]

Hi SINAD, fantastic characters, I like very much the design of them, the girl's dress is really good, I am not so sure about the blade of the boy, i don´t find it suitable for a fairytale, in another environment it would be very cool, but it's only my opinion. I too like better the layout from second sketch. I know your final image will be awesome as usual. Keep it up.

[kmest]

very coooooool....i liked it alot...very good illustrated image and caracter designs are perfect.....gonna have an eye on your thread...it worth it.....
BTW,i saw your city 5 mounths ago...very good peoples and nice city:thumbsup:

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