View Full Version : Preparing For Race, Jung Ho Park (2D)
jabraniho 03-09-2006, 05:38 AM http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/182782/182782_1141886292_medium.jpg
Title: Preparing For Race
Name: Jung Ho Park
Country: USA
Software: Photoshop
Hello~~This is my second post here~~
This is my personal project that i'm working on. I design the vehicle couple days ago, and just wanted to make the design interesting,so i put them in a environment. Thanks
Final High Res.
>> Hi resolution image << (http://www.jpconceptart.com/display/Preparing_For_Racefixed123.jpg)
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5 stars for me, awsome work. i would only add that if you have so precise shadow from upper elements over the ships and over the floor, maybe the ships as they're closer to the ground, they should have a more defined shadow in the floor than the shadows coming down from upper elements. Again, excelent work.
Rizo
andreasrocha
03-09-2006, 09:30 AM
Wonderful work...really reminds me of Ryan Church and Dusso. The only thing that doesn't work so well in my opinion are the background areas along the contours of the spaceship. You seem to have lost the depth between the background and the spaceship.
Nonetheless...5 stars for an awesome piece!
BlinCk
03-09-2006, 10:05 AM
Amazing work, fantastic shadow/lightning
theCloudmover
03-09-2006, 11:52 AM
Awesome.
No crits from me. :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:
Velinov
03-09-2006, 11:59 AM
That's awesome, man!!! You've add some great atmosphere on this image... pure madness!!!:thumbsup:
Cheers
Fahrija
03-09-2006, 12:06 PM
Beautiful designs and good atmosphere - the image gives a very good impression of the scene.
regards
fahrija
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toobi
03-09-2006, 12:41 PM
crits already given. congrats! great atmosphere, fantastic piece!
Staszek
03-09-2006, 02:05 PM
Very good work, remind me Dusso works :)
TRHaDEs
03-09-2006, 02:07 PM
exellent pic!fantastic effect ,lighting ,and shadow,Really amazing!keep the good works up!:thumbsup: :eek:
iChiaz
03-09-2006, 02:43 PM
Wow looks great!:thumbsup:
SirNeo
03-09-2006, 03:05 PM
Good job, cool design!
jabraniho
03-09-2006, 04:40 PM
Thank you for the good comments~~~
Rizo ,andreasrocha ,BlinCk ,cloudmover.net ,Velinov ,Fahrija ,toobi ,Staszek ,TR.HaDEs , iChiaz ,SirNeo~~ thanks guys
-jung
just one more day~~ its friday~~~hehe
SeifoSid
03-09-2006, 05:07 PM
Although the design of the ship's is a bit unclear due to the environment, overall it's an amazing image, great work keep it up. 5*
SINAD
03-09-2006, 06:08 PM
There's no word for this work.
just :bowdown: :bowdown::bowdown:
RobertoOrtiz
03-09-2006, 06:59 PM
Great work!
Plugged!
-R
shivesh
03-09-2006, 07:22 PM
wow, gr8 art. i like the ship . keep it up .
AlyFell
03-09-2006, 07:33 PM
Truly fantastic work! :)
PaulNewman
03-09-2006, 07:55 PM
Aircraft design is fantastic!
The environment with partial shadows make the scene believable, I wonder what is casting the shadows - a tower maybe? I feel like I want to walk into the scene to go and see the aircraft up close like the people in the scene are doing. The aircrafts look used - operational - very good.
My crits:
There are places where the background's value just does not allow the aircraft to come forward in perspective, especially the furthest aircraft, only slightly. Very hazy background strokes following the contour of the aircraft fuselage break the tarmac detail and cause a fuzzy halo.
Background aircraft : how does the pilot see straight ahead over that nose? I may even remove that - whatever it is - and leave the craft with a slender slightly upward bulging nose - the existing lines are great!
Excellent work :thumbsup:
giddushyp
03-09-2006, 08:02 PM
great work~~ i love your color and shadows, it looks like there is construction building going on just looking at the shadows~~ you pulled it off !
again excellent work~~
great artwork! :thumbsup:
picolo
03-09-2006, 10:30 PM
great lights:buttrock:
Kid-Mesh
03-09-2006, 10:44 PM
When I first saw it I thought it was 3D. Very well illustrated...skills :bowdown:
MichaelZHsee
03-10-2006, 02:19 AM
great rendering,fantastic reflection study:bowdown:
jabraniho
03-10-2006, 02:32 AM
wow ~~ thank you for wonderful replies~
Seifo_Sid - thanks seifo , i'll try to put in simple back ground~~ to make my ship design stand out~
SINAD - i just check your stuff too ~~it was amazing
RobertoOrtiz - thank you again
shivesh - thank you for liking my ship
Poshspice - your character stuff was awesome ~~
Paul_Newman - thank you for your crit, it helped me alot , yeah its kind of true my ship is getting lost into the background~~
giddushyp - thank you , i know who you are~~hehe
MichaelMotion - you always put good words ~~hehe thanks
picolo - thanks
Kid-Mesh - where can i find more stuff of yours i saw little in your blog, it looks awesome~
very nice comic characters~~
sh@ke- moving mask is very funny~~ thanks
wow~~ it took me long time to respond back to you guys , thanks all
hightillidie
03-10-2006, 04:35 AM
Seriously have no words for this! Nothing short of spectacular.
gary-smith
03-10-2006, 04:40 AM
Wow great work on the use of colors and spectacular work on the lighting. So much outstanding photoshop work these days. Nice job! :D
pogonip
03-10-2006, 06:03 AM
Wow concept artist at Midway ...now that's a legacy company . Anyways checked your blog out also , great work man very top notch stuff !
Tilstrom
03-10-2006, 06:27 AM
top class work, i love it. :cool:
Fiasko
03-10-2006, 09:20 AM
it looks like 3d, but it's made in photoshop....amazing:bowdown:
michael-olszak
03-10-2006, 11:09 AM
really, really nice man. i like the mood of this one. the colors are cool.
nice work. keep it up.
warpy
03-10-2006, 01:14 PM
nice design man, show us some more.
JoppeBakke
03-10-2006, 03:23 PM
Amazing design!
Five stars.
rawwad
03-10-2006, 03:54 PM
Fantastic work man! excellent style and design! 5stars :)
Weider
03-10-2006, 04:20 PM
Beautiful!!!
Ismail
03-10-2006, 06:14 PM
Nice!:) Very Nice!:) Thanks for posting this piece. :) Definitely looking forward to seeing more.:) Your drawing blog has excellent works.:)
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Ronson2k
03-11-2006, 12:22 AM
Looks like the highspeed vehicles raced at the Bonneville salt flats. One even looks like it has a 'sidecar' very cool. Quite a bit of shadow though? If it's a space craft atmosphere your going for a little less tree in the area perhaps. Looks like a inpromptu car show and shine happening which is also cool. If your going to keep the trees (that could be cool aswell) perhaps a shot through the trees. It's not to often you see spacecraft in that setting and if you had glimpses of the crafts obscured you would really want to know what they are. UFO in the woods as it were. This would also go along with the show and shine thing.
Something to concider perhaps. The sun when it hits these vehicles will contract the area's that are exposed to the sun. Like a brass instrument. If you have these hightly tuned racing machines they will want to keep them at a consistant temp throughout. So shade would be something that would be good for the 'show and shine' or post race. Pre race prep would have them out in the sun getting ready. This could effect the aerodynamics of the vehicle or the interrnal structure (as with an aircraft at different altitudes - although that is due to cooling and not heating). So in the end you want the race vehicle to be consistantly cool or hot depending on what the ambient temp is so shade is something you would avoid (prior to racing).
Although the setting is very nice it's perhaps not to desirable prior to a race. That said its a very cool image. The models are fantastic. A real thirties look to them. I love the materials. Post race vehicles are so hot the sun has little effect on them so being in the shade is more of a driver/pilot compfort thing then a vehicle cooling thing. So post race would be quite cool.
Ronson2k
BARoNTiERi
03-11-2006, 01:23 AM
nice pic, really cool shadows, great job!
koshime
03-11-2006, 08:54 AM
Love the composition.
Is there perchance and procedural or sequence of saves showing your progression for this composition. Woudl love to see how you started and progressed with the painting as it took into final shape
loocas
03-11-2006, 10:30 AM
Ahw! This is awesome painting man! :buttrock:
At first I thought it was something new from Dusso! Really nice...
http://forums.cgsociety.org/images/rating/rating_5.gif from me man :thumbsup:
jabraniho
03-12-2006, 02:47 AM
wow i didn't know i was going to get this much reply ~~
hey guys, some of you were asking how I work, here's a process of my image~~ thanks
http://www.brunowerneck.com/display/process_cg.jpg
-jung
You're really not afraid to go in and totally change up your image at any time during the process it seems.
I could learn from that..
koexistens
03-13-2006, 02:09 PM
Amazing, the lightning is so natural. Great work! 5 stars.
wazai2008
03-13-2006, 05:33 PM
what can i say?nice work!
Pixelcounter
03-13-2006, 06:26 PM
Waw, that's some awesome work you have there!
I especially like the shadows and reflections on the vehicles, no crits from me!
5 stars
Djampa
03-13-2006, 09:25 PM
Aircraft design is fantastic!
The environment with partial shadows make the scene believable, I wonder what is casting the shadows - a tower maybe? I feel like I want to walk into the scene to go and see the aircraft up close like the people in the scene are doing. The aircrafts look used - operational - very good.
My crits:
There are places where the background's value just does not allow the aircraft to come forward in perspective, especially the furthest aircraft, only slightly. Very hazy background strokes following the contour of the aircraft fuselage break the tarmac detail and cause a fuzzy halo.
Background aircraft : how does the pilot see straight ahead over that nose? I may even remove that - whatever it is - and leave the craft with a slender slightly upward bulging nose - the existing lines are great!
Excellent work :thumbsup:
Hi there,
I tottally agree with these C&Cs above here. I was going to type almost the same words...:D
Well, but I have to say: 5 stars on the design side, painting may need some lil corrections, but overall the concept is great, lines are great, you rocked on this ! Congratulations !
:thumbsup:
brunowerneck
03-13-2006, 09:26 PM
hey Jung,
I like the design on the spaceships, good thing you added some chracters in there too to give us a better idea of scale, colors are beautiful too, subtle, subdue... the values are a bit too close to each other, yeah, but it doesn't take away from the overall feel... very nice :)
Bruno
harryb
03-14-2006, 05:55 PM
This is great! I love the design of these vehicles -- they almost look like flying batmobiles but way cooler. Five Stars!
ThePriest
03-15-2006, 08:40 AM
Very impressive indeed.
CyborgJA
03-15-2006, 04:01 PM
no words, simply 5 stars.
DuncanLong
03-15-2006, 08:09 PM
What a fantastic picture. Amazing.
carbonmatter
03-16-2006, 12:22 PM
Impressive! Love the design, the lighting sells it for me... love the palette you've used.
Looks like a real jump forward in your work - keep it coming!
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