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aldog
03-09-2006, 04:23 AM
I've been debating between a locker room scene and a samurai guy with a dojo in the far off horizon, decided to go with the locker and started today.

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/4949/lockerroomjock11gp.jpg

aldog
03-09-2006, 04:27 PM
Here's a little update, that first was just a rough sketch so I could get something up here.

http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/4697/lockerroomjock20mr.jpg

JTD
03-09-2006, 07:40 PM
I would add the head back in. It looked more realistic.

aldog
03-09-2006, 09:23 PM
hehe, thanks for the tip :thumbsup:

aldog
03-10-2006, 07:21 PM
Another update.
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/3931/lockerroomjock32og.jpg

any suggestions for environment?

aldog
03-17-2006, 05:04 PM
So I added some hair and decided I don't like the hair, but I left it on there for this version. I'm also trying to work on the background.
http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/3420/lockerroomjock44bn.jpg

http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/4310/lockerroomjock58sh.jpg


Any help you can give me on the background, please do.

trialanderror
03-22-2006, 01:08 PM
looking around for some older posts I found this one very funny... Re your question maybe you could make it look like a sauna with some old fad guys lying around in the background...

Hope you will continue on this...

aldog
03-22-2006, 02:58 PM
Heh, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Here's some more fiddling with the background, but I really like the sauna idea, I've been thinking that I want to do something with showers in the back, or any sort of water and mist type of situation. I just haven't been in a lockerroom for a good 3 years now, so it's hard to think of how it might be layed out.

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/3189/lockerroomjockbg17tb.jpg

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/7748/lockerroomjockbg26hi.jpg

trialanderror
03-22-2006, 03:29 PM
Im happy you continue with this. Your idea with the mist/water is great. I just would widen the room for the fad guys LOL... Maybe you could add those people as silhuettes behind the mist and refine it later on if you like. I have to confess Ive never been in a sauna, so cant really help you...

P.S. I saw a nice one in the daily sketch thread (heat, 644 by paperclip). Maybe you could use it as inspiration...

aldog
03-22-2006, 05:33 PM
hehe
I think I will widen it actually. I think that would look very poster like...
It will leave alot of room for more details and other small things.
I remember paperclips sketch from "heat", that's gross, I think he did that way to well, I think a fat guy would do nicely to make my main character look sexier
;)
thanks trialanderror

trialanderror
03-22-2006, 07:01 PM
Im very excited about an update...

P.S. it already looks sexy LOL

Ilikesoup
03-22-2006, 09:57 PM
The figure looks good but I find it odd that he's walking around the locker room with just a jockstrap on. Walking around in boxers, briefs or nude makes sense but the j/s isn't really comfortable as so it's seldom seen unless he's putting on a sports uniform or taking one off -- for example standing in front of an open locker with a pile of clothes around him. I'd remove the garment and drape a towel over his shoulder as though he's walking toward the showers. The stoop in his posture fits well -- either he's tired from working out or he just lost a big game. Since all the lines converge toward the showers it could reinforce that he's a pitcher who did poorly and was told to "hit the showers".
Anyway, I'd advise fleshing out the rest of the scene before putting any further detail on the man.

arnocob
03-24-2006, 02:35 AM
:)
Hi!
I cannot really have suggestions (maybe cause i am really tired)
but I like the theme and it will be nice to see how you manage this...
So, i'll wait for an update.
Bye

aldog
05-01-2006, 07:28 PM
thanks for all the feedback, i hope you all didn't lose interest in this

i'm still working on a layout for the background,
i need help on it though!
http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/9758/lockerroomjockbg35is.jpg

rajbir
05-05-2006, 06:32 PM
keep goin i am waiting for the fianlicture

aldog
05-06-2006, 05:41 PM
thanks, I don't know what a fianlicture is though.

http://img315.imageshack.us/img315/6353/lockerroomjock69ve.jpg

enthombed
05-19-2006, 05:19 PM
hey dude, great start here, hope you continue posting and finish this.


Cya

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